Decent voices, bad voice sample. :P
Alright, if I was searching the audio portal for voice actors and I came across this I would have a couple of thoughts going through my head. My first thought would be, "Hey not a bad voice." I'll admit that some of them need to be improved a little and you just need to be yourself on more occasions. Some of them sounded like you were trying a little too hard.
The second thought that would go across my mind would be, "The mic quality is very poor and he seems to be a beginner." The quality wasn't the best, wasn't terrible, but staticy nonetheless, which is something someone wouldn't want for voices at all. I know it's something that you can't really help since it's clearly the mic that you own, but it also isn't going to matter to people who want quality voices.
The biggest thing to improve on is not to breathe into the mic and to take your time with some of the voices. To get rid of breathing in the mic just back away from the mic a bit more and to make up for the sound difference you will have to talk louder/clearer. You seemed a bit rushed in most of the voices and that also resulted in heavy breathing sometimes.
I didn't like the, "What are you looking at part" as that was one of the lower quality voices and didn't sound too great. The other voices were decent, but it sounded like you wanted to stick around the deep voice more often for some reason. Just be yourself for a couple of them too.
You did switch to you got mail instead of you have mail, which was weird, and doesn't sound as good as you have mail.
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