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[**DEMO**trance**DEMO**]

Woah..

How in the world am I suppose to leave a review with that monster of a review after mine?

For a demo I personally thought it was rather good. What exactly is going to be done with the final version? I know I would recommend making it longer, which I think you are going to end up doing.

I think it has a nice catchy beat to it. Pretty fun to listen to even though it is quite a short demo. Nothing too repetitive or anything as it isn't very long. An overall good demo in my opinion.

Oh boy.. deleting it? :( I dislike it very much when my review numbers go down, but do whatever you have to do.

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Assios responds:

Thank you very much ;D And no, I won't delete it after all. I wouldn't ask for reviews in the review request club if I was going to delete it. I'll just update the song when I've made the final version of the song, and the reviews and score will stay :)

[sur ur ur ur ender]

Hmm...

I think the song itself would be much better without the sur ur ur ur ender part that you had in there. Of course without it then it still wouldn't sound very good at all. So the overall sound of the song was just downright terrible, but the little smile that I get from listening to the song deserves a couple of points.

I think the best way to improve this one to improve the voice that says sur ur ur ur ender. I think it should be more of a deeper voice or even a computerized/robotic voice wouldn't sound too bad here. I also think the surrender should have just been said as surrender. It probably would of helped a lot if you would have included some more lyrics than just that one word too.

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mikkim responds:

YOU BETTER sur ur ur ur ender to listening to lyrics more closely.

[Song of Storms (My version)]

Not too bad.

Sounds good enough to be used in a flash game. It worked pretty good with the game that you made and you used it in. I liked the variety that you used in the song. You first started off normal, really slowed the submission down, and then really picked up the pace again.

Could be cleaned up a little bit though. I think it would sound a little bit better as a loop so I wouldn't mind seeing you getting it to loop well.

fallensoul289 responds:

thanks for the review yes it could be cleaned up a bit

[Waking the Beast]

You bastard

Don't delete your audio. ^^ I hate it when my review count goes down that much. Ha, I do remember this piece of audio and I probably mentioned something in my last review with how you should add some kick ass vocals in it, but fuck me I say that in everyone of your songs that don't already have vocals.

How did I miss reviewing this one? I just reviewed your stuff a couple of days ago I thought. Oh well, I guess it happens. I'm happy I checked in so I didn't miss it. Just a tad bit repetitive, but it still kick ass. *Another vocals comment* You know vocals help stop making a song so repetitive right? Haha, I'm just picking on you though. I know real life has you busy and everything.

Great guitar and great drums all around. Great piece of audio that everyone should have a listen to sometime.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

haha. Thanks very much man. Sorry about the deleting stuff. Won't happen again.
Anyways, Thanks for the review, dude. Glad to see you out and about again.

Yeah, song would be less repetitive with vocals, As soon as I get the time, I will. :D

Thanks again, man

[Revolutionary Physics]

Pretty good.

I can barely tell that it loops. The only reason that I could tell it was going to loop at all was because of the little fade out effect where you made things more quiet towards the end of the song so it would fit the beginning of the submission a little better.

You did something that people that make loops for video games have a hard time doing. You made it long enough without it being too long and you added enough variety throughout the song so that it's not that repetitive of a loop. For some reason people don't understand what I mean by a loop not being repetitive and this is exactly what I mean. You added enough variety throughout the entire song so by the time it gets back to the beginning it doesn't really sound like it's the same old same old all over again because we kind of forget exactly how it sounds.

Good job all around and it will probably be used for a flash submission, especially a game. Or at least it would be useful for that.

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SFaPiL2 responds:

I'm glad that it's not repetitive. I was worried that there was TOO much variety, making the listener distracted.

Thanks alot. I hope it'll be useful to someone.

[Day of Trance (Day 1)]

Not too bad, but not the best.

The impression that I got from this submission was that you were just practicing with a new program and having fun making a new submission. I can tell that because it's really generic meaning it sounds like most other submissions of this genre.

The build up effect wasn't too bad. It seems like almost everyone uses the build up effect in their songs anymore. It's still something that should be used in a lot of songs though in my opinion.

The overall sound of the submission was very repetitive. Working on some sound effects or different things to add variety would probably really help the submission out.

The sound that you introduced somewhere around 17 or 18 seconds into the song was very interesting though. I really liked the sound and it gave it almost a dreamy feel. Something that seems to me doesn't really fit the rest of the song too well, but should definitely be put in a different song sometime if you can get it to work.

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jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review, yeah, I was mostly just seeing what this version had to offer and just threw this together.

[--Torn--]

Good job all around.

Good Points - It had a nice catchy beet and was fun to listen to. The vocals were really good and sounded great with the song. The song itself could probably be used to make a some sort of sad flash animation for valentines day. You did a good job using the lyrics in the song.

Bad Points - Not too much. Perhaps adding a little bit more variety with the instruments would have made it a little better, but other than that I though this submission was really good.

Overall - A very good song that you did a great job with vocals on. Probably would be useful for a sad flash.

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Jimtopia responds:

Glad you liked it, that'd be cool to see this in a sad V-day flash. :)

[Mindlink]

Not bad.

Good Points - I like the guitar in this submission and the drums were pretty decent to. The submission had pretty good length and decent variety to it. It looks like it may be a decent song to set up with lyrics so you may want to think about putting lyrics on it sometime. Especially if you guys are going to consider yourself a band. You may want some more people, especially a singer or two.

Bad Points - Perhaps the song itself could have been a little louder. I won't take any points off for this because I know my speakers are bad. Even though there was a nice amount of variety you still might want to add something. The guitar and drums make it seem a little empty, but again it's really not too necessary, perhaps just things you may want to think about. I do think there were times where the guitar was a bit weak.

Overall - A decent song that could perhaps use a couple of things, but it's pretty good by itself.

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Element responds:

OH THANKS

[.:Something Soothing:.]

Pretty good.

Good points - This was a nice calming song to listen to. It reminds me of a song that would be played in the introduction or the credits of a flash submission/movie. The part that you had around 1:28 was decent, but it should have lasted a little bit longer. The entire song itself had a lot of variety within itself even though the main sounds were still a bit repetitive.

Bad points - Like I said you did have a lot of different sounds in there, but the main sound almost played through the entire thing and got a little repetitive. Not too much though. The ending could have been a little different. Perhaps a fade out would have worked a little better here instead of the abrupt ending. That or a longer series of notes to end on. I basically just had to try and find something a wrong with the submission and if that was all I could come up with you did a pretty good job. :)

Overall - A pretty good relaxing song with not too much wrong with it.

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kchrules responds:

Thanks for the feedback

[} Drizzle Chizzle {]

Decent Loop

Good points - Almost a decent length for an ambient loop. It gives off a nice relaxing beat to it. It could probably be used for a very small section in flash, but probably not for a section that would be playing for a longer amount of time.

Bad points - The instrument that you have coming in around 24 seconds needs to be played just a couple more seconds in my opinion. Then you should quit playing them someway so that when it gets to the end of the song it loops a little better. The length of the submission wasn't too bad for an ambient loop, but perhaps a little bit longer with some additional variety would make it a little bit better.

Overall - A decent loop that could be just a tad longer with a little bit more variety. Not too bad though.

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theta4 responds:

Yeah. I agree that that beat could go longer. It didn't seem right having it as short as it was. I was originally gonna have it come in at 0:15, playing for the last 8 measures of the song. The only problem was that it made the last half of the song too repetitititive.