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What happened there in the middle? I mean, I see you were trying to use it as a transition, but it got WAY too quiet and it lasted WAY too long. You could have upped the volume of it just a little bit and made it last about half of the time or even less than that. I like that right after it got quite it got really loud fast, but it was still too long. I honestly forgot the song was playing for a little bit.
The rest of the song was good. It's simply that middle section that's taking away from it in my opinion. The rest was fast paced and enjoyable all around. And like I said don't take the middle part away, but make it shorter. Making that part more sudden in my opinion would make this piece much more enjoyable.
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