Not bad
First off thank you very much for the two reviews that you gave me on my submissions. It was greatly appreciated. Secondly, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get to reviewing this. I was a little busy. On to the review.
Animation/Graphics - I think for the most part you did pretty good. The drawing style was just a little rough and perhaps a little simple. If you worked on your drawing of the people and some other things a little more I couldn't see this getting anything less than a 8 to a 10 on a review.
For the most part the animation was pretty smooth. The way that you focused on the pigeons was great. Small details like that is really what makes submissions good.
Story/Content - It's usually nice to here a music video and this one was a pretty good one. Nice simple content and everything. The animation went along great with the audio and that's basically what the content of a music video should be judged on. Nice use of animations and you barely used the words, which I liked. Sometimes people get into the whole flashy word thing too much and I think you used a nice amount of it.
Audio - Of course the audio was good since it was a music video and everything. It was an interesting song to choose. It seemed like a difficult one to make a video off of, but that could be because I didn't really know what the song was about. I've actually never heard of or heard the song at all before.
Overall - The flash was a good music video. The only thing that you need to work on is probably your drawing skills a little bit. Other than that it was pretty good.
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