Well this does need a lot of work.
Animation / Graphics - First off I want you to understand that I'm not flaming you for your flash or anything. I just want to try and help you out for future submissions. This really didn't include animation at all except for the switching from one part to the next. The drawing and font wasn't organized and just seemed to be everywhere. I recommend slowing the text down, or even better yet adding a button that allows you to choose when to go on when you are done reading. I also recommend some kind of animation whether it just be the stick man moving in the beginning of the flash, or something more. Also, try and straighten up the text itself and organize it a little better.
Story - Not too bad of an idea. I don't know if reading facts on a flash is something too exciting, but I have seen worse ideas. Maybe by adding more facts, a pre-loader, and a button which allows people to start over from the beginning would make this a lot better.
Audio - Audio can really jazz up a flash animation. You can either add a song in the background or make a selection of songs on a menu that a user can choose from to their own liking. If you added buttons to go back and forth between the facts then you could add a little sound effect when you clicked it.
Overall, this does need a lot of work, but hopefully you will take some of my suggestions into consideration when making a new flash or when updating this one. Good luck.
- GS -
C52
Newgrounds Mafia.