Welcome to the Dark Side
Nice introduction to this song. What I really enjoyed was the part right around 52 seconds where it picked up a got a little bit heavier. It does seem like it needs a little bit more added to it. Perhaps a couple of screaming vocals and a little bit longer submission with a kick ass solo would finish this song off properly.
An overall good song though.
Nice job
When I was listening to this song I imagined a scene in a flash submission of a character/hero walking away from a big battle that he just won with pride, glory, etc.. I'll probably end up using it in a flash in the near future for exactly a scene like that.
Nice guitar that's pretty soothing in this song. A littler short, but nothing wrong with it. It's packed full of quality. ^^
Good job all around.
Good job all around.
Good Points - It had a nice catchy beet and was fun to listen to. The vocals were really good and sounded great with the song. The song itself could probably be used to make a some sort of sad flash animation for valentines day. You did a good job using the lyrics in the song.
Bad Points - Not too much. Perhaps adding a little bit more variety with the instruments would have made it a little better, but other than that I though this submission was really good.
Overall - A very good song that you did a great job with vocals on. Probably would be useful for a sad flash.
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Glad you liked it, that'd be cool to see this in a sad V-day flash. :)
Not bad.
Good Points - I like the guitar in this submission and the drums were pretty decent to. The submission had pretty good length and decent variety to it. It looks like it may be a decent song to set up with lyrics so you may want to think about putting lyrics on it sometime. Especially if you guys are going to consider yourself a band. You may want some more people, especially a singer or two.
Bad Points - Perhaps the song itself could have been a little louder. I won't take any points off for this because I know my speakers are bad. Even though there was a nice amount of variety you still might want to add something. The guitar and drums make it seem a little empty, but again it's really not too necessary, perhaps just things you may want to think about. I do think there were times where the guitar was a bit weak.
Overall - A decent song that could perhaps use a couple of things, but it's pretty good by itself.
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OH THANKS
Pretty good.
Good points - This was a nice calming song to listen to. It reminds me of a song that would be played in the introduction or the credits of a flash submission/movie. The part that you had around 1:28 was decent, but it should have lasted a little bit longer. The entire song itself had a lot of variety within itself even though the main sounds were still a bit repetitive.
Bad points - Like I said you did have a lot of different sounds in there, but the main sound almost played through the entire thing and got a little repetitive. Not too much though. The ending could have been a little different. Perhaps a fade out would have worked a little better here instead of the abrupt ending. That or a longer series of notes to end on. I basically just had to try and find something a wrong with the submission and if that was all I could come up with you did a pretty good job. :)
Overall - A pretty good relaxing song with not too much wrong with it.
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Thanks for the feedback
Decent Loop
Good points - Almost a decent length for an ambient loop. It gives off a nice relaxing beat to it. It could probably be used for a very small section in flash, but probably not for a section that would be playing for a longer amount of time.
Bad points - The instrument that you have coming in around 24 seconds needs to be played just a couple more seconds in my opinion. Then you should quit playing them someway so that when it gets to the end of the song it loops a little better. The length of the submission wasn't too bad for an ambient loop, but perhaps a little bit longer with some additional variety would make it a little bit better.
Overall - A decent loop that could be just a tad longer with a little bit more variety. Not too bad though.
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Yeah. I agree that that beat could go longer. It didn't seem right having it as short as it was. I was originally gonna have it come in at 0:15, playing for the last 8 measures of the song. The only problem was that it made the last half of the song too repetitititive.
Pretty good. :)
(Testing out a new audio review style)
Good points - Very fast pace and catchy song to listen to. Not too repetitive and never got boring or anything. Perhaps it's size had something to do with not being too repetitive, but you also had a nice bit of variety in it.
Bad points - I don't think it really loops that great. You may want to play around with it a little bit and try to get it to loop a little bit better. Perhaps a little short even though that did help prevent the audio from being repetitive. Perhaps work on a little bit of a longer submission in the future.
Overall - A pretty catchy song that is worth a listen. Good job and keep up the work.
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Thanks for the review, ghost. The new review style is pretty good and simple. Glad you liked the song.
Great job.
I really enjoyed listening to this song. It was very soothing and relaxing. It was very simple, but it almost seemed professionally done. I wouldn't mind seeing this being used in a flash submission that had a sad introduction, conclusion, or just somewhere in the story itself that's sad. When I listen to this I imagine someone walking along all by themselves just thinking of sad thoughts, but they just keep on moving forward anyway.
Overall - Great job on making this song. I really enjoyed it.
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Wow, thanks!
I really hope some of my musical creations are going to be used in a flash :-)
I'm very grateful for you review and i'll keep doing my best to make songs that other people can enjoy.
MH16
Really good.
I felt that this was a very relaxing song to listen to. Something that would probably help put you to sleep if you needed it. I wouldn't mind hearing the version with lyrics because it looks like it would turn out kind of funny with the lyrics that you had. Great song though and it's great for just sitting down and relaxing. (Without the lyrics at least)
Overall - You should upload the one with lyrics. I wouldn't mind hearing them. Good job all around.
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Lmao....
Let me tell you my routine while reviewing real quick... I open up all of the songs in different tabs that I feel like reviewing. Stop all of them from playing and just let one play while I do some work around the room, homework, or surf the web... Lmao, that means I usually listen to the song, read the author comments, and then listen to the song again. As you can imagine I didn't see this coming at all as I walked around the room with my volume turned way up. :P
On to the song. It's quite funny in itself. Probably funny enough to get added to my favorites just in case I can think of any use for it in any future flash projects that I have. Without the moans the song itself probably wouldn't have been anything too special, but it wasn't too bad. The overall effect of the song covers that up though.
Overall - Funny and probably useful in the future if I ever need a sex scene in flash. :)
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I should have started the song with a disclaimer haha
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