Amazing.
I loved everything about it. The vocals, the guitar, the length of the song, etc.. Pretty much everything about it. I'm happy that you put the lyrics in your author comments though because I would of had a hard time understanding some of it with out them.
C52
corky... i love you man! you are the fucking man.
Awesome.
As soon as I heard the chainsaw in the beginning I knew I was going to love this song. I loved it, I added it to my favorites and I gave it a 5/5 and a 10/10. Good job and good luck on future submissions.
C52
Why thank you very much, glad you did! Some people find the chainsaw "not fitting" with the rest of the song, which I can't really understand because the chainsaw goes with Dad'n Me like beer and chips! ;)
Anyways, thanks for checking it out!
I didn't like it.
I didn't like it, just because it wasn't really my style, but I won't give it a bad rating just because of my personal taste. I thought it was just a bit boring and sort of repetitive. I really didn't imagine something like Cosmic Love when listening to this. Good luck with future submissions.
C52
yeah, this was an earlier submission of mine heh. However i agree it IS repetitive and does need work. Thanks for the review!
Nice.
A couple of things that I liked was how long the song was, but it never really got repetitive or boring at any point. I also love the addition of vocals, because not too many audio submissions here have the vocal part on their submissions. They are also something that helps prevent someone from getting bored. You said that this isn't the definitive version and that you may change some things, so I will be sure to come back and check up on your stuff to see if you have anything different or new. 5/5 and 10/10.
C52
Thanks Corky52 ! I'm glad you liked it ! See you on the " Rage's gift to you: Abusive reviews" forum !
Sonofkirk
Alright.
It's very good for what you have. I admit that it was very short, but what you had was good. I think your author comments pretty much sum up what the song made me imagine.
C52
I think stretching songs isn't a good idea, i believe one can hear it out, so i just kept it how it was :)
Not bad.
The only thing that I didn't like was that I was pretty much listening to the something over and over for about three minutes. There needs to be a little bit of variety in it in my opinion. Something to keep the listeners interested by giving them new sounds to hear. It's really not my style, but overall not bad.
C52
I can understand and appreciate where you're coming from. However, I would like to remind everyone that this is an ambient piece. Therefore it is just supposed to provide background filler for an event, movie, game not be the main focus. If you start getting complicated on song it is no longer ambient and becomes an actual song. This song is also quite slow to develop. Starts and ends the same, some things come in and then fade out. I guess its kinda trancey or something. Thanks fro the review.
-AvatarKami
(Kami the Avatar)
Hmm.
I just felt like something was missing from this audio submission. I don't think you should take this version off of newgrounds whatsoever, but I would like to hear a more finished version of the song. Good luck to you whatever your decision is though.
C52
Lol, lucky for you, we can't take it off anyways. Once a song hits certain criteria, it is forced to stay on this site. Glad you like it!
-Jason
KTRECORDS
Oh man.
I didn't like it at all I'm sorry. The beginning of it was very.. rough at best. It sounded really weird in the beginning like something was distorting it. There was parts of it which weren't too bad, but that was ruined since as soon as those parts started the song ended. Work on almost everything about this audio submission and good luck on future audio.
C52
~Review Request Club~
well...... very constructive.
Well...
I usually like rock, but for some reason I just couldn't get into this song. I thought some of the stuff didn't really belong and that maybe if it were to be just a bit heavier or faster that I would of enjoyed it more. The guitar is always my favorite in audio submissions though and you did have that. Overall, not too bad, but in my opinion needs some work.
C52
~Review Request Club~
Guitars rule. Thanks for your review!
Not bad.
I didn't think it was TOO repetative, but it did get repetative throughout the song. I think this is mostly due to the length of the audio, but it wasn't repetative to the point where it was unjoyable. I liked the quick beat and liked how it got started right off the back. Overall, not too bad. It could use a little bit of variety. It seemed like a song that could of ended a long time ago.
C52
~Review Request Club~
Thank you!
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