Fro's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yumification - Air Battle]

I like it a lot. (Points to madness combat poster on bedroom wall) Chances are I'm being a bit biased because I'm a madness fan, but oh well.

This looks like a Neo/Agent Smith bsttke scene.

Is that an extended clip in the handgun or is he just happy to see me? Or is he reloading?

The red may be a little too intense. It kind of takes away from the details of the characters a little bit.

This style would make a really cool Madness animation. Any plans for that in the future?

YumiPan responds:

That definitely is an extended clip and I definitely wanted to go for a matrix type feel.

I am a beginner when it comes to animation, I only use madness sprites, but I am slowly working my way to more fluid drawn animations and might use this style for it.

[How to get Modded]

Wait... I thought you just took a kids picture off the internet and photoshopped "I'm sorry Tom" over it... This is.. an amazing rendition of the events that happened on 4/1/19.

I will cherish it forever.

DrSevenSeizeMD responds:

No I made this myself with sweat, tears, and broken crayons, JUST for Tom Fulp!

[Barn Owl]

I don't think I'd change this one up at all. I think it's actually pretty stunning. I love the details in the eyes and the entirety of the picture has this really nice balance to it.

LiamRomK responds:

Oh thank you very much.

[Cute little pichu]

Nice job.

Something about his eyes and emotionless features give this kind of a creepy feeling though.

Brandobotic responds:

Thank you and yeah he has a bit of a thousand yard stare... Still cute though😁

[Valentines]

Could use a little Fro, but it'll do nicely.

ZetoSoul responds:

Maybe someday.

[Onslaught]

I really like the background and colors used here. The shading and shadows were pretty awesome. On the topic of shadows I feel like the shadows of the rocks and his body maybe should have been facing straight back instead of to the back right corner. I understand that there seems to be a strong light source taking it that direction, but the shadows seem to completely ignore any effect that the lightning around Jack Wernicke would have on the direction of the shadows. Also, it would have been really cool to see a shadow of the boss with a darker outline to really give a good feel for how intense the battle is about to be.

I feel like some of the proportions are off a little. The lower body is very long while the upper body seems to be a little short. The arms bug me a little because the forearms are the same size or bigger than the upper arm. The ankles seem extremely tiny for the size of his legs and the neck seems odd for some reason. I think it may be how much of a point it comes to on the top. On the hands the fingers are odd sizes. It's weird that some fingers that should be smaller than the thumb in girth are actually thicker.

Overall it's a really awesome piece and a new approach on a Madness character. It would be pretty cool to see a flash series created using characters in this style.

Swf responds:

I did the shading and lighting really late at night so it was kinda rushed, i'll keep that in mind for future drawings; Agreed, the body anatomy and proportions are off and should have been adjusted accordingly (this was originally just a pose sketch) I felt like this was perfect for Jack and incorporated it anyways. Overall, a lot could be added and fixed on every aspect of this. I appreciate the time you took to critique my drawing, thank you.

[Japanese Tiger]

(Basically insert copy and past of my last review here, but don't actually do that because it wouldn't be a good thing to do in the review section)

Again, could use some contrast like your last piece. Maybe a red dragon attacking the the tiger? In all seriousness something red in the background instead of just the white could really make this stick out and look better.

MonoFlauta responds:

Almost same copy and paste of the last review hahaha. Same thing, just copied it on paper and give it a shot. I guess that by that time I still believed I could get better at drawing haha

[Japanese Dragon]

This is really good. Did you take a picture of it or scan it in? It kind of looks like you took a picture of it, but it would have turned out a little better if it was scanned. If it was scanned then ignore what I just said. :P It is kind of dark though and a little bit of light would have made it show up more clear.

I feel like it needs some contrast. Maybe a blue tiger or something fighting the dragon! Or some sort of basic color in the background to make it pop more.

MonoFlauta responds:

I just looked to an image from google and tried to replicate it on paper. Sure I would have done it a lot better if it was scanned but well, wanted to try it out!
Thanks for the review!