Not bad, but a couple of things.
I found that in the very beginning that it seemed to start off very slow, but that picked up not too long afterwards and it was a pretty good audio submission after the introduction. It wasn't the longest audio submission, but it wasn't too short either. I wouldn't mind just seeing it a bit longer. The ending was awkward since it just stopped playing for about 5 seconds before it ended. The ending was too sudden in my opinion.
C52
~THNX!
Almost.
It almost had the creepy sell your soul type feeling to it. It just seemed like some parts didn't belong and that it could of been just a little bit more creepier. It was almost there though if that is what you were going for. Oh, and how am I suppose to sell my soul now that you have it from your last audio submission?
C52
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It was meant to be funny.
But yeah..You do have a spare soul in your trunk right?
Oh man..
This had a lot of potential when I first started listening to the song. I was like well this is going pretty good, then all of a sudden most of the song was to quiet for me to even hear and there were so many random noises that it just seemed weird most of the time. Oh well, 5 for the potential that it did have.
P.S. - You have my soul. Great, just great. Be careful with it.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Pretty good.
Before I read your author comments I thought to myself, "This audio could probably be used in some sort of RPG game." Then I noticed that it's from Zelda, meaning that you made a pretty good version of it yourself to make me think of a game. Not bad at all. Good job.
C52
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Thank you, Corks :)
Pretty good.
The hole thing was pretty good. The only thing that I could see wrong at all would be the low volume in the beginning of the song. I couldn't hear a thing even though the audio was still playing and my volume bar was moving meaning there was actually noise. The only time this happened was in the very beginning though. Good job overall.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Thanks for the review.
Awesome!
It's probably the best audio submission that I had listened to today and is probably the best one that I have listened to in a while. I love the entire thing and I honestly don't think I could give you any criticism to make this any better. Good job, I really liked it.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Thanks. I've worked out many of the problems from other times I had submitted this. I guess it worked :)
Good job for your first attempt.
A nice little loop for your first attempt. I would like to see future submissions include more then one instrument and be just a little longer, but I totally understand that this in is simple and short because it's your first time attempting an audio submission. It seemed to loop pretty smooth and I didn't really see anything wrong with it except for the things that I previously said that you could improve on. Keep up the good work.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Thanks for the review. and yeah, more instruments would make it sound better. I'll take that into consideration for my next song. I'm glad you liked it!
I loved it.
The guitar in your audio submissions is awesome. This song was just like one big guitar solo. I really enjoyed it, and if just after a couple of your audio submissions I think I'm going to add you as a favorite author and I might come back and add a couple of your audios to my favorites. Good job overall and keep up the good work.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
Yeah, Rock on man!
I love Metal! I loved the music in general, but the lyrics were a nice addition. I like that you put the lyrics in your author comments too. The solo was awesome, a good solo can always make a song. Not a bad ending, but I'm not exactly sure if the last bit was needed. Overall a really good song. Good job.
C52
~ Review Request Club ~
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