It's alright.
First of all, just because someone gives you some criticism don't automatically bitch about it in your author response. The review space is used exactly what that person used it for. In their opinion they thought it was repetitive, so they are allowed to post it. I mention all of this because I also thought it was a bit repetitive. You make the argument that it isn't really, but it still sounds like it is, and it just seems like something is missing from this audio. I can't exactly touch what it is that is missing, but it just feels sort of empty. Hopefully I don't get a negative response back to this. I will though if someone can't handle feedback.
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