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It's alright.

First of all, just because someone gives you some criticism don't automatically bitch about it in your author response. The review space is used exactly what that person used it for. In their opinion they thought it was repetitive, so they are allowed to post it. I mention all of this because I also thought it was a bit repetitive. You make the argument that it isn't really, but it still sounds like it is, and it just seems like something is missing from this audio. I can't exactly touch what it is that is missing, but it just feels sort of empty. Hopefully I don't get a negative response back to this. I will though if someone can't handle feedback.

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Mid-Night responds:

I enjoy criticism, I don't enjoy pointless nagging.

Nice.

This was really cool. I've listened to some great audio today in the portal. I really got into the song. I thought it was going to slow down a little about half way through, but it did pick up again. Overall great job.

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cazok responds:

I needed something in the middle to give the listener a break. Glad to hear it didn't ruin it

Great.

Great guitar and bass so I would have to say good job too you for that. Great vocals, but it sounded like there was another voice in there at the same time. Was that also his or somebody else's voice? Anyway, it's great to add vocals too a song submitted to newgrounds since, much of the audio doesn't have any and it tends to get boring without them. Good job.

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Naitzmic responds:

Thanks for the compliment.

There are no other voices in there, it's just that
Alex likes to harmonize alot, and so he will dual-layer (and often triple...!)
the vocals, singing it once, then singing it again on top of the first track, and that's what you're hearing there.

Most of my music does have vocals, so feel free to check it out.
Also, stop by Alex's profilepage and listen to the rest of his stuff.
It's really good.

It reminds me.

The beginning reminded me of a Madness animation. I think it was just the beat too it. Your attempt was to make a song geared more towards the Dance genre, which I think you accomplished pretty well here. Good job.

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ReaperTechno responds:

thanks
i think i did too :D

Actually one of the best audio I have heard.

The thing that I found was that it actually wasn't too repetitive, which is a problem that can easily come along with audio as long as yours. Which brings up my next point, most of the audio here is a lot shorter then the one that you have submitted. Very good for your first post. Good job.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

thNX Man i was looking to change it up alot in this song

Pretty good.

I have to admit you were right about the solo. You did do a pretty good job on it even though the abrupt end is a little annoying, but it doesn't take too much away from the audio. The drums were a nice touch and yeah, it would of probably sounded sort of empty with out them. Overall, a nice job. Good luck to future submissions and good luck with your music in general.

- GS -

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ManMadeKing responds:

That's the best the solo has ever sounded coming from my fingers, and I am very glad I recorded it.

Thanks for the review. There is more to come.

I think it's great.

You say that it didn't turn out too good, but I think it sounds decent. I wish I could hear the version before you had tweaked it, but that's alright I will take your word on it. This song sounds like it would be on one of the horror games that I had for my old Sega Genesis platform. I could even see it being used on a sprite animation here on newgrounds on some sort of dungeon or prison scene. Keep up the good work with the Audio.

- GS -

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Newgrounds Mafia.

ManMadeKing responds:

The version before I tweaked would be static out the ass.

The song was made, truth be told, for a RPG game from that RPG maker dealie. But the project never got finished so I had this leftover.

Nice.

In my opinion this is by far the best work that you have submitted to newgrounds. Keep up the good work and keep submitting to the audio portal. This one is longer then the others which is a plus and is all around just good. This was even one of the first songs on newgrounds that my girlfriend liked and she seems to hate the audio on newgrounds. This one gets a 10/10 and a 5/5 from me.

- GS -

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Newgrounds Mafia.

KumoKan responds:

Haha wow thanks! I'm glad your girlfriend liked it! lol

-KK-

Not bad.

I could honestly see this on a fast pace flash animation or game that is submitted on newgrounds. The only weakness is it's shortness. I would recommend making it a bit longer and add a little variation in it. It sort of just got repetative, but as you said it was while you were learning how to use FL Studio. I hope to see your "greatest work" sometime.

- GS -

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Newgrounds Mafia.

KumoKan responds:

Yeah... I don't think I'll ever touch this song again. Maybe..., but I doubt it. But like you say, hopefully someone would find it useful in their flash! =D

Thanks for the review!

-KK-

Not bad.

Not bad for a demo at all. Especially not bad if you were just messing around with the guitar one day and came up with this. I'm not very good at writing audio reviews, and I don't know too much about music, but everything seemed fine with me. I can't take any rating off for how short it was since it was a demo and wasn't made to be a full song yet. I guess all I can say is good luck with your future audio submissions to newgrounds and send me a PM when you get the full version on newgrounds or any other submissions. I will be sure to stop by and review them and vote on them.

- GS -

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Newgrounds Mafia.

KumoKan responds:

Thanks! It means a lot to me. =) When I get back from vacation I'm going to record a full version with a better mic and everything. I also have some more submissions coming in, and I'll definitely send you a PM when they do.

-KK-

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