Thanks for uploading this ^^
And sorry it took me so long to get to actually reviewing this. I loved it, but sadly that flash project that I told you about went down the drain, but I'm thinking I can find the use for it somewhere else. It all depends I suppose. Anyway, great like always and added to my favorites. The guitar was awesome and the drums were great. It's a great backing track for people to use.
Grrr...sorry I missed this review. Your welcome. Glad you dig, bro.\m/
Hm..
I have a back and forth opinion on this. It sounded pretty empty, but at the same time what you had was of such great quality. I'm stuck somewhere in between in the terms of the rating I think it should have. It is pretty long though and that's where I think you could make it seem a little less empty. For a song so long it must be hard to keep non-repetitive. I suggest perhaps taking a little of off it or add something to it. Probably wouldn't want to add to much though because it may become a little cluttered. Anyway, I still think it's deserving of a 9 because of it's quality.
Yeah, I think this is one of my better quality songs, I'd love to have a play around with it some more, maybe adding some more atmospheric effects would fill it out more.
Thanks for the review. :)
Hm..
I liked the bells in the beginning. What I didn't like though is the original gap in between the first set of bells and the second set of bells and then again between the 3rd set of bells. I thought you should have either set those three series of bells off with a little less time in between. What I really hated about this song was the sound of that beep or whatever it was. I think you could take that out completely, but I guess that's my only suggestion about that. The bells should have ended after the introduction. I think using them more than you did in the intro made it kind of annoying and rather repetitive. The ambient music was great though. I would like to hear more of that and perhaps some other stuff that would represent what a town would look like when their were dead bodies laying around, etc.. Perhaps some fire sound effects or other slight ambient sound effects like that?
>=P
I use to love Kirby when I was a young kid. Wow, does this bring back memories of when I use to play Kirby on my old fashion black and white gameboy. :) That was a long time ago now. D: Anyway, not bad at all, but I do think that it could have ended just a bit better. I think that it just kind of ended abruptly and sounds unfinished. Other than that not too bad man.
at least you understand this one... >:U
Not bad.
I think I like how this sounds just a bit better than your last piece. I think you missed it up enough at the end where it wasn't too terrible or anything, but I do think you should add about 10 to 15 seconds with another beat somewhere in the middle. That should be enough to get enough variety in the song. Not bad though and I like how this loops and sounds a little bit better than your last loop.
I liked it.
I think this would almost be a great loop for a flash submission with a battle between light or darkness just like you described in your author comments. Although it does need something added to it. I think it would be much better if it was changed up somewhere so it wasn't so repetitive. Something like a different beat in the middle of the song or something like that. I think you almost have it though.
Hmm.
You must have requested this song just a couple of weeks before I became a member of the Review Request Club. Oh well, I got around to it late even though it doesn't matter for the club anymore. Side Note - I meant to say pass me back in my last review. Not pass me pack. Oh well, a typo is a typo. Hmm, well with this audio here I could almost say the same exact thing as my last review except take out the Trance part. This was just so.. simple and not that good. Kind of boring really. I really don't understand how the score was reached with such a simple piece of audio. It's almost like you massed voted it or voted 5 on it everyday or something. :/ Anyway, to make this better you really just have to add a lot of stuff to it. Some other instruments, make it longer, add variety to it, etc.. Just not that good man. Again, sorry that I can't help you make it better, but like I said I don't know how to make audio so I'm of no help.
I thought it was fitting.
Even though all you have to do is write two more audio reviews and pass me back up, I've decided to write this audio review, which will allow me to pass you in total audio reviews. Don't get me wrong. It's not bad, but what you need to understand is that I could go to the Trance section of newgrounds, close my eyes, and not be able to tell the difference between this song and most of the low scoring trance songs. It really lacks in originality and structure. It's just so simple and.. well just boring. I do see that it was your first trance song. I would have given this submission a 5/10, but since it was your first trance I will bump it up to a 7. Sorry I can't give you any technical tips on how to make your audio better because I don't really know anything about audio itself. I just know that this is pretty short, boring, unoriginal, etc.. Also, congrats on having it used in a submission. Now pass me pack. =P
one of my first tries on making a song, is not that good... but is not tha bad
Not bad.
Are you still gathering ideas for this? It's been awhile hasn't it? =P Ah, a nice relaxing song to before I head off to bed. I've finally reviewed all of your audio. I don't know if that is a good thing because I'm finally done or a bad thing because almost all of your audio kicked ass. I'm sure you will submit something new some day and I will eventually get around to reviewing it. This wasn't any different than the other submissions. Somewhat unfinished sound to it, but you still have a way of making them great. Good job.
LoL, yeah, it's been awhile...and I can't remember how I adjusted the sfx to get the actual sound near the end. :/ Stupid brain. ^^
I still have to answer a lot of your reviews but I will...in time. :)
Thanks again for reviewing my shit! <3
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