Hmm.
Keep working on it man. It just sound incomplete at the moment like something is missing from it. It needs some length added to it, but of course you know that since you wrote that it's not the full song yet in your author comments. Very random, and some parts just seem to be empty. I can really see this turning into something though so don't give up on it and keep up the hard work. Good to see you starting to get back into submitting audio too.
C52
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(That's if you are going to post it in the RRC, Just in case I guess)