Fro's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Robotics 1]

Needs some work.

Animation / Graphics - The drawing were decent, maybe a bit primtative and simple, but never the less they were decent. No small animation in some of the body parts which always adds to the game.

Story - Another robot dress up game. The only thing that I recommend to make this section a little better would be to add different parts, or maybe different color parts.

Audio - You had no audio, which can brin the score of an animation down farther then you think. On dress up games like this is really helps if not only do you have music in the background, but if you have a menu where you can select different songs for the person who is playing to choose from.

Overall, needs a lot of work, but it's stuff that you could do to help out your score next time around. Good luck.

C52

[How To: The Alien Attack]

This is great.

Animation / Graphics - Everything here was either perfect or near perfect. The animation was very smooth, and the drawings were very well done. Not too much more to say then this though. Good job.

Story - You had a lot of information and a lot of different categories, which also makes this section just about perfect if not perfect. I would really like to see a guide made just like this about how to survive a zombie outbreak. That would be awesome. The mini game was pretty cool, but did have a little bit of glitches in it. Like when you went back to the place where the guy was looking for his crowbar and he shoots the agent, if you click on the knife then it goes back to you stabbing the alien.

Audio - Great music in the beginning and you had great sound effects everywhere else in the flash too. Great.

Overall, I really loved it. Keep up the good work.

C52

Audio -

[Delayed Radar]

Not too bad.

Animation / Graphics - The animation was good. I didn't see any flaws in the movements or animation. The drawings could of been a bit better since they it just seemed a bit primitive to me with everything being square and circle. It didn't seem like any real objects.

Story - Trying to find something isn't always a bad idea, but it doesn't seem like a very exciting game too me. Meaning I probably wouldn't want to come back and play it again. The circle that you could only see through did make it a bit more challenging so it was a nice addition.

Audio - Nothing wrong with the audio here. Audio is always a nice addition to an animation or a graphics. You could of maybe added audio when you click on the orbs.

Overall, not too bad. Good luck on future submissions.

Review Request Club~

C52

[BeerBubblePop]

Pretty cool game.

Animation / Graphics - Pretty decent graphics and animation here. The drawings were decent and the animation ran pretty smooth. I found the explosions to be a little touchy and it seemed like they reached a little bitter farther then the animation itself.

Story - I thought your explanation on how to play the game was done well, both in your author comments and on the flash. Decent idea for a game. It's been done before, but it's not over done or anything. I know it was your first time with actionscript, but maybe you could of added levels and after getting a set amount of points you could advance to the next level.

Audio - The popping noise was pretty cool, the only thing that I can suggest here is too have some sort of music playing in the background or even a selection of songs that a person can choose from while playing.

Overall, not too bad of a game, but if you were willing to add something to it such as levels, upgrades, or more audio I think that you could get a much better score.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

DeadPoolkun responds:

thanks for the advice, I've added some music since other people mentioned that,
but I think I'm going to work on something new instead of adding levels and stuff to this one.

[Drawing tutorial: Chickz]

Pretty good.

Animation / Graphics - I can't really say anything about the animation since most tutorials don't include animation. I can say that the drawing and detail was very well done. There was much detail put into the drawing.

Story - You had a great explanation for every single step and every single page. You also had a great introduction. The button at the end which starts the flash over was a nice addition too simplify the flash instead of closing it out and starting over.

Audio - Sometimes audio can really help the rating of a flash. You could do a couple of things here. You could add a song or a menu where people can select different songs to their own liking or you could even add sound affects when you click on the next and back button.

Overall, a very good detailed drawing tutorial. Good job.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

HeliosStar responds:

Thanks for your detailed and well thought out review, I tried finding some sort of script to initiate/stop music but I just couldn't. I'm a bad coder, haha.

[The NG Quiz Volume 1]

I like these types of quizzes.

Animation / Graphics - I have to admit that it wasn't the nicest quiz that I have ever seen. Sometimes its nice to see a bit of animation in a quiz too. Like said before the buttons weren't the easiest to click, but nothing too hard. I wouldn't mind seeing the categories, and just the font in general to be more organized and straightened out.

Story - A couple of good questions there, but there could be a lot more added. I'm interested in what questions you are going to add in the future. If you ever need some help thinking of questions drop me a PM and I will see if I can help you out with that. Instructions are always a nice addition.

Audio - Nice audio here, but on quizzes I like too see a menu where people can choose what song they want. If your up to adding something like that I'm sure your score would increase on your next flash.

Overall, not bad, but you still need a lot of work here. Drop me a PM if you need some help thinking of questions or when you submit the next flash because I will be sure to stop by and review it.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

SCUMBALL responds:

I laughed my heart out at this review. Corky, thanks so much.

Yeah, the second one will have audio selection and a mute button.

I did this as practice to the other flash you know about, I don't think I'm good enough to go full blast on the other one, so I'll make these until I get better, hopefully the second one will be much better received.

Well, knock yourself out, I'm going to have 15 questions so 5 questions will be fine, thanks.

What's the NG Mafia? PM me back.

Thanks so much for the great review, once gain, laughing.

- Murad136

EDIT : Sorry, the reason I was laughing was because I thought that the review was posted from THE GS account.

[Arcade-Style Pong]

Just like any other Pong game.

Animation / Graphics - I have to admit that the arcade system was a nice addtion in the very beginning of the flash. The graphics weren't too different then any other pong game though. The biggest thing about making a Pong game is some way making it different or new. I know this is a hard thing to do though.

Story - Since this is a Pong game I really can't rate on the story of the game. So I will rate a couple other things about the flash. The controls were really simple since all you had to do was move the mouse to move your paddle. It was also nice that you different difficulties even though I honestly didn't see a difference between the three.

Audio - This is the biggest thing that hurt your rating from me. You could of done a couple of things here. You could of added just one song, or made a menu where people playing could choose between some songs. You could of also added sound affects when the ball hits the paddle, etc..

Overall, it needs some work but it's not too bad. Maybe adding some audio would help out the overall score. I hope my review helped.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

[Sonic quiz (redone)]

Nice quiz.

Animation / Graphics - Very nice animation for a quiz! Most quizzes don't contain much animation at all, but yours was pretty well done. When I review quizzes the biggest thing I look for is how organized the question and answers are and yours was well organized. Good job on this category.

Story - Looks like you had your facts straight. I'm just guessing though since I don't remember much from sonic. I use to watch it when I was little, but stopped watching after awhile.

Audio - Good audio here. Reminds me of the old sonic games. Maybe you could have a selection of audio that the person watching could choose from. If you do I'm sorry that I missed it.

Overall, probably one of the better quizzes on newgrounds I have seen. Good job and keep up the good work.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

[Claus Of Rage]

Decent game.

Animation / Graphics - For the most part the drawings and animation was nicely done and ran smoothly. There were a couple of things that could of been drawn better.

Story - Again, decent story. Actually pretty original in my opinion. I like that it wasn't just a one part game. The second part of the game helped a little. I wouldn't mind the game being just a bit longer though. The last boss was also pretty easy to beat. He barely even touched me since he just repeated his routine of attack and defend.

Audio - This was probably the best part of your flash. You had nice sounds that went well with the animation and also some nice music in there.

Overall, not too bad and congrats on having your movie pass submission on newgrounds.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

[Make a Madness Character]

Pretty good.

Animation / Graphics - I really can't give you a score on this since the sprites weren't by you. So I will rate some other stuff here. I like how you gave credit to everyone who made stuff and I also like the features that you showed during the loading screen.

Story - Again, I can't really give you a story rating so here I go again rating something else instead. You had a hell of a lot of things to choose from to make your own character which is a plus. The controls were also very simple as all you had to do was click and drag the different body parts and objects.

Audio - Pretty cool music. The only thing that you could maybe do is add some different music with a menu to select which song the person watching wanted to choose.

Overall, very good. Congrats on getting a movie to pass on newgrounds with a decent score too for the first time. Keep up the good work.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

Dekuboy responds:

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.