Fro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Apocalyptic themes]

I think I really like this one, with your permission it would be great if I could use one of three or even all of them during a closing credits of a short film I'm making. It would be nothing special that would mske money or anything. Full credit would be given.

I enjoyed the first one, thought the second one sounded a bit better, but really loved the 3rd one. Great job all around.

[Forum Story: Dramatic Reading]

You played the part of Fro so well. That's exactly how I sounded in real life when I wrote my part.

[Atlas Theme]

This is what happens when a piano falls down the steps for wayyyyy too long. Not to mention the piano was out of tune before it started its fall.

Once it hits the ground everyone can breathe a sigh of relief, because Atlas it is over.

[S001 file reading part 1. (ECF: file S001 welcome: David Branwood)]

I think the writing is prerry goos, but a bit repetitive at times. Changing up the words being used would add a bit of variety to this.

For example, you used the statement this is both good and bad multiple times. The wroting almost became predictable to a point because of small things like this.

The voice acting was clear and precise, but contained a ton of awkard pauses and emphasis on parts of words where they seemed unnatural. Just removing the pauses in between words would make this feel more natural and smoother.

NyanaCreation responds:

the script is from a while ago but i will deventually try to keep the repeating of sentances out of it or atleast a small as possible thanks for the tip and i hope @KillaCup reads the last part to i'll try to tell that to my next voice actors as well anyway thanks again for the help Fro i appreaciate it ^^

[Elevator Music Meets Hip Hop]

This was an oddly satisfactory combination of old school and hip hop. I know elevator music is usually something repetitive plsying in the background, but that being said this did seem to get a bit repetitive towards the end of the song. Perhaps something to change it up a bit? I have no clue what though.

[Murphy Time (Cheesy Love Song Competition)]

Haha, some parts seemed to be all over the place, but overall I thought it was hilarious.

A song like this may sound cooler if there had been a female voice singing their part.

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

XD

Yeah dude, I'll see if the mrs wants to contribute. If I survive after she hears it... definitely like 99.9% fictional.

[Looks At The Stars (Aydin vs Fro)[160BPM Heavy]]

She's going to absolutely love this. This came out so much better than I could have thought.

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Amazing dude :)

[Paradara]

This is not the theme song of Superman... I hope you're crying the tears of an infant unicorn like promised.

Hm, I found this submission a little boring. At first it sounded like a fun little submission, but it was a bit repetitive and by the end of the song nothing really happened. That being said, as a ambient piece, what it was, it would have actually been pretty fitting for a rolling credits in a movie or game. Even though even as an ambient piece I stick to my original comment that it could have used a bit of variety to make it a little more interesting.

My favorite parts were the beginning of the song and the ending of the song. I liked the slow progression in the beginning and the fade/echo type ending sounded pretty great.

Overall, a nice ambient piece that I could see rolling with the credits of an animation, but it could have used a little bit of variety.

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ChristopherReeves responds:

Hey thanks for getting back to me. Im honestly sort of relieved thats all that was wrong with it.

Thanks again!

[Zircon ft. Jillian Aversa - Breathing You In (Equilibria Remix)]

Zircon is a brand of stud finder.

Well since newgrounds is in this transition stage with their audio player I can't really talk too much about certain time points, which makes reviews a little bit harder, but meh, I'm not that good at it anyway so here it goes nonetheless.

The very beginning sounded a little empty/slow progressing, but as soon as the vocals came in and the the tempo picked up I started to enjoy the song a bit. I always had this impression that the music was a little overpowering compared to the vocals. Either toning the music down a bit or increasing the volume of the vocals would have made this song better in my opinion.

I didn't always feel that the style of the vocals fit the fast pace style of the music. To me a faster tempo vocals/style would have been better fitting. (I use these words like tempo and stuff without really knowing what they mean to an actual musician. Please excuse me lol)

Other than that, I really liked the singer. I thought the song was a good stand alone without them and you have a really good piece here. Keep up the good work.

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Dylnmatrix responds:

Sorry for the late response on this, but thanks for the review! We appreciate it!