Hmm, you really really suck at this.
Nah, I'm just joking. ;) Good job. Sometimes it doesn't sound like it's the best quality, but I really did enjoy listening to this. Perhaps good credit music for a submission? PERHAPS good credit music for our Madness Day submission also.
Maybe even something like when the car full of swat guys drives in during the beginning. Probably better for the credits like I said though.
I see that it was suppose to loop, but instead I wouldn't mind seeing it being about 10 to 20 seconds longer with a fade out at the end. (Kind of like what you would want for credits of a submission, but that's just me being hell bent with this being the most useful for credits)
The song itself has a nice upbeat sound to it. Maybe even a sound that suggest that there is something wrong or dangerous ahead, but nothing is going to stop you even if it is dangerous.
Decent job all around. Anytime you ever submit something drop me a PM or something and I'll review it.