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[Madness Assasination: KT]

Not bad at all! Better than I can do!

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Even for usage of sprites (I use sprites too) it was done very well. You had very nice backgrounds and a lot of detail in all of the scenes. Animations were very smooth and almost everything looked great.

I didn't want to sound weird, but when I saw Coop's review said basically the same thing then I didn't feel so bad. :P The breasts on the women need to be done much better. They were oddly apart.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

A little short, but I think this could be improved by you simply looking into the research of the Kennedy Assassination and making an animation that goes along with the whole thing. You could even test out all of the assassination theories that there were all in one flash, etc.. Something like that would improve the quality and the length of the submission.

~ Audio ~

I didn't see anything wrong with the audio. I liked it all around. Sounds were synced well and song was well chosen. Good job here.

~ Overall ~

I think the biggest thing to improve was just the length of the submission by adding more plot and different scenes then you had. I know it was just for practice, but I still have to review it like a "real" submission. Great animating though.

~ Review Request Club ~

C-Doodlez-Man responds:

Oh believe me, I know alot more than that about the actual assassination. kinda a facination of mine. I wasn't going as much for accuracy on this one but if I redo it I definetly will. Thanks for the review though and definetly some valid points.

[BOXO meets the aliens]

Lmao

~ Animation/Graphics ~

The artwork is pretty good all around. Not that bad at all. It's the animation that looks like it needs a lot of work. A lot of stuff that I would like to call "lazy animation" because it was simply the basics. Such as when the aliens would float there their flames were just a static picture of fire. That should have been animated.

The part where he eats the aliens seemed very rushed.

~ Story/Content ~

Lol what the fuck was going on there? It was so random that it was funny. I tend to see flashes that try to be extremely random and end up trying too hard, but this was just about perfect content wise. I really can't comment more than that about the plot and everything. I enjoyed it.

~ Audio ~

I didn't enjoy the voices. I understand they were alien voices, but they were just plain hard to understand and annoying. I think you should have changed the voices a little and not only that, but add subtitles so people can read along. That way people can't complain about not understanding like I'm doing right now. :P

~ Overall ~

The WTF and the rest of the ending just made this submission good to me. It really made me laugh and that gave you some extra points on my rating. Good job with the randomness.

mmautrey responds:

thanks for the honest review, i know i need to improve, i was gonna do subtitles but like u said (lazy animation) :P