Fro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[On to the Show! (short theme)]

Hmm, I think perhaps a bit longer.

I just think 17 seconds isn't really enough to actually enjoy a song. I let this load up while I was reading something and when the song ended I was left with the feeling of, "Oh.. that's it?.."

Probably not a good feeling to get when listening to a song. My personal opinion is I wouldn't mind you making a bit longer, but hey that's still completely up to you. Could almost me used in a Xmas flash submission, but I think again that it would have to be a tad bit longer. Could be used for a main theme, intro, or credits with it's sound.

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itsameyayo responds:

It's meant to be an intro, so I'm thinking I nailed it on the head. Kinda lazy to do an extension, but if I made this for someone, my first response is to extend it because I follow my visions, and then let it be shaped to fit what it needs to. It's like having clay, then getting a pot ;D

-Thank you for your insightful review!

-ImperfectDisciple

[extrallusionist]

Not bad.

I liked the sounds that you were using, but I almost feel like you overused things a little bit in this, which isn't too bad if your going for the video game type feel, like you are, because video games tend to use a lot of repetitiveness in their songs.

I got a feeling of robots being manufactured in a factory. Just sounded to me like one was created, the belt they were on moved down, and another one was put together, etc.. I guess it can be weird how people envision songs. :P

Not bad, can't really think of too much to improve on. Perhaps parts were drawn out a little bit. Changing things up sooner could give it a feeling of more variety.

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Silent-G responds:

yeah, I was feeling a bit lazy when I made this so I reused a lot of stuff. thanks for the review.

[Pending Explanation]

Not too bad at all.

I really see something like this being used in an old RPG style game. Just one of those cheesy ones with a terribly generic story line on an old system that you couldn't quite save for yet. :P

Has a very video game type feel to it. Sounds to me like it would make very good background for music. I didn't exactly like how long you had the noise going on in the end. I think it lasted a little bit too long and sounded drawn out. Other than that not bad at all.

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Silent-G responds:

it would be awesome to see this used in something, even if it were cheesy and terribly generic. I held the last note at the end for that long because if you listen closely, another sound starts to fade in a bit, and I couldn't figure out how to get it to do that without holding it for so long. thank you for the review.

[Horror -- SFX]

Odd

I should really watch the flash to see how the sound effects worked in the movie, but meh lol. So I'm assuming they worked well for the movie. Is that your voice for all of these effects? If so you might be a pretty decent voice actor. Perhaps you should look into it a bit more.

I'm assuming the noises were spread out because that's the way they were timed in the flash? If not you should put them closer together or perhaps submit them individually as different sound effects so someone doesn't have to listen through the whole thing and maybe even have the chance to use them in flash submissions of their own.

Good all around though.

SilentCobra responds:

Heh, that's not my voice. Also, I can do voice acting if I want to. This was all just sound effects I downloaded from Adobe Soundbooth and made into one track. That and Haloguy234 is still working on his flash. He just PMed me out of the clear blue sky and asked for my help. I don't really know how he's going to use this in the flash, I just thought that if the sounds were spread out, it would sound better. You know in horror/action games if there are scary sounds around, they are almost always spaced apart to create ambiance.

[The Last Pilgrimage]

Woah, pretty cool!

It seemed to change up so much and have so much variety throughout the entire thing! Very original sound to it and a great song all around. Sounds great without vocals or lyrics.

Has a lot of Heavy Metal to it, but seems like you can hear a lot of other genres in it to. I really like the classical sound it has. I always thought that classical went well with heavy metal.

Overall - A very good piece of audio. I'm happy that the first piece of audio that I've reviewed in forever was a good one. Keep up the good work!

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LightKeeper responds:

Thanks man. Yeah, I try to spread the genres that I can use within a song, though the main influence was metal here and epic classical music. I'm still planing to go back on this one though because the sound is a little thin if you get what I mean. Thanks for the review though. :)

[Papa Johns Commercial Par]

Ha!

I don't know much about voice acting, but this was really funny! Good voices, probably voices I would like to hear in flash submissions here on newgrounds.

I laughed every time it talked about how cheesy it was because it was like this audio submission. So cheesy! Ha, that's a good thing though because you pulled it off to the point where it was funny.

The making love to the pizza line was priceless. Very funny!

So overall very funny and really worth listening to.

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ForNoReason responds:

Really glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing.

[High Speed Massacre]

Cool!

I'm going to add this to my favorites and download it. You don't mind if I use it in future flash animations do you? I think it's very fitting for a flash game/and or movie. More towards the game side of of flash, but perhaps a sprite or game related movie also.

The song overall was very catchy and fast paced. I had a lot of fun listening to it and you did a great job on it. I think the only thing that could be worked on a little is the ending. It just kind of seemed to end suddenly or abruptly and I think it would sound much better if it ended smoothly. It almost seems to loop, but not quite. Perhaps that's just the way newgrounds gives a split second in between though. It seems like something that could easily be edited down a little.

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LightKeeper responds:

It's actually designed to be a loop. At about 1:26 it does it's first loop around, if you listen to the end it's exactly the same. I lengthened the loop out to properly show how it should loop because I know of the Newgrounds tendency of adding that micro nano second that just screws with loops.

As far as using this is a flash, I wouldn't mind. It was made for a game, but there's nothing restricting it from use in other media. I'm 100% fine with its usage in an animation and actually encourage it. Hey, think about it: Double exposure - My music in flash gets me known, and you using it in a flash gets that animation noticed by all the people who come to view the music.

Thanks for the review Corky52. Glad I was able to give you a fun and fast paced experience! :D

[Ghostbustin' @ 140 bpm]

Awesome!

This brings back some good memories of the Ghostbuster movies! I actually wouldn't mind going back and watching those again now.

The beginning starts off rather well and it has a very catchy beet throughout the entire song. I almost actually danced to this song a little bit in my chair. :P I did notice that sometimes after the halfway marker in the song it didn't seem to run together too smoothly. It almost sounded like everything stopped for a split second and started back up again, which gave it a sound of being glitched or skipping. (For example between 1:35 and 1:36 sounds like it needs to be cleaned up and several times after it)

Other than that noise I thought it was a very good song. I'm going to add it to my favorites.

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Skela responds:

THanks for the review!

[Denmark Dancing (Revamped)]

Not bad at all.

Overall a really good song and fun to listen too. Never really gets too repetitive or anything like that. Good variety of sound effects and noises used throughout the entire song.

The voices or grunts that you used about half way through the song felt very random to me, but I did like them. I think you should have implemented them into the song a little more often, but at the same time try not to add them too many more times so it's too repetitive.

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ThunderHorseL responds:

Thanks a lot for the review!

Yeah, the sound clip is from Egoraptor's "Gears of Awesome"

I just threw it in there to see if anyone would actually catch the reference.