Nice job.
I was excited when I saw Hip Hop because it made me remember all of those funny as hell rap and hip hop songs that you have. Ah, too bad you don't have vocals on it yet because this is just what this song needs.
I just loved the sound of this song. It was like a mix between Hip Hop and Metal. The guitars were really heavy and gave this song an awesome sound. You had a good electric sound going on during the whole thing too. Another great one man.
Thanks man, vocals one day. FUck, I have no time for those anymore. :*(
Thank you for the review, sir.\m/
It's been awhile.
It's been awhile since I've heard that godly music of yours. I was busy with college and everything, etc... Should be back long enough to catch up on all of the songs that you have made that I haven't reviewed. It's good to here some good stuff again.
You know I've been practicing my scream and I just can't... just can't get it to sound good. What's the secret man? Perhaps I just don't have the lungs for it or something, but I just can't get it to not sound... cheesy I guess. Perhaps we can't all do it like the pro you are.
Anyway, nice addition to the contest. Good job all around and rock on like always.
Thanks man. Good to see you. Yeah, r/l can definitely be a bitch. A balancing act that I'm slowly losing.
Anyways, there are a few instructional videos on the web for vocal ranging.
But my way....
When you are taking a huge ...and I mean HUGE shit...the "hold on to the towel rack for leverage shit scream". Then just open your throat a tiny bit more. And you get brootal. Haha.
GOod to see you man. Thanks for the review!\m/
Kind of weird.
I enjoyed the guitar of the submission, but a lot of the song sounded weird. A little too weird at some times, but overall it wasn't too bad. It had a real spaces sound to it or just a sound that made it sound way out there.
It had a lot of variety to it so it never sounded too repetitive or boring, but at the same time the amount of variety that you had made the submission sound kind of weird. It's hard to explain exactly I guess.
Overall - An original sound to it and I especially enjoyed the guitar in the introduction. The other parts maybe not so much.
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Yeah, I tend to shirk away from typical guitar scales. But I didn't think it was all that out there... it's just in E Minor. And this was made before I even dared to tread into the realm of off meter beats...
Pretty good.
I honestly had a hard time getting through this a couple of times because I kind of got bored (not to be rude), but I think it was because the submission was really relaxing, which isn't really my kind of music. I can't be opinionated on the review though so the quality of the submission was great. It even put my girlfriend back to sleep when I first listened to it this morning. She really liked it because it was so relaxing so it must have been pretty good.
Overall - Maybe a little repetitive, but a very relaxing song to listen to. Especially if it can put some one to sleep like that.
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Thanks much for the review!!! The repetitiveness is something I'm deffinately trying to overcome!
Not bad.
I think what would have made this submission sound so much better is some heavier guitar towards the end of the song. Right around 1:28 (after the song slows done, which I would like to add sounded perfect where you had it) I think you should have went into a much faster heavier sound with the guitar. Something like a solo would have worked perfectly there.
You had a lot of variety in the song though and it was a fun fast paced song to listen to. Really good job all around.
Overall - Perhaps needed to be a little bit heavier so it could related to the rage that you were talking about in your author comments.
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Pretty good.
I enjoyed the song for the most part. I thought it built up rather nice, but there might have been a couple of places where it was kind of messy. Maybe not though because it didn't sound too bad. Other than it sounding a little cluttered in a few spots I still think you managed to get the sound to work for you. I think the ending was done very well.
Overall - A decent song that may be cluttered a little bit, but the overall quality is good.
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Thanks!
Weird
This had a different sound to it. It was pretty interesting all around with some original sounds and noises. That being said it did sound pretty weird, but at the same time different which means original and original is good in some cases. It changes up a bit so it's not too repetitive. I don't think it really gives the vision of waiting in a terminal though. More of a weird dream or something like that.
Overall - A very different sound to it, but it's not bad. Kind of interesting in itself, but I don't like the title that you chose for the song.
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Maybe in the weird dream the person is in a terminal. huh? Ever thought of that. It's okay... neither did I.
Great job.
I enjoyed listening to this submission. It was pretty relaxing and just generally a fun submission to listen to. I thought that it was very simple, but you got it to work for you as it sounded great while not being too cluttered or anything like that. It wasn't too simple either as it wasn't too repetitive or boring. I think you found the happy medium with this song. Perhaps a couple of vocals would make this submission sound a lot better.
Overall - I can't really think of anything to make this much better than it was. Pretty good job all around. Keep up the good work.
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Oi, vocals? :O Well I don't have the slightest clue on where to add vocals and I don't even have a mic atm, but I guess I could try it out sometime. :)
Thanks for the review!
Great job.
I loved the feeling that you give off with your author comments and the audio itself. The music was done very well and the vocals matched the song perfectly. I think you did a pretty good job on not making the music during the vocals too loud and vice versa. I could hear both of them perfectly fine without anything drowning anything else out. I also like the sound effects that you used in this submission.
Overall - I can't really think of anything to critique this submission on. Good job all around.
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Thanks for the review! When I made this, I felt the need that this was an underrated subject that needed to be addressed. It's more of a in-your-face political statement than a song. I really think that music has to get over the stage of speaking mostly about love and sex (or in some genres the all so important question of what a pimp the singer is and how fast his rims turn after he stopped his car). The production for this one took quite some time, because I felt that the balances were a bit fragile, but I'm glad that in the end it came out OK. Thanks again for sharing your opinion (and for liking this)!
Pretty good.
The instruments sounded really good, but there was a couple of points in the song where it sounded a bit muffled. I won't take any points off for it since I don't see anyone else say anything about it and it could just be my speakers.
The vocals and lyrics were also done very well. Perhaps the vocals were drowned out a little bit towards the end of the song, but it wasn't too bad. Perhaps think about adding the lyrics to your author comments? Sometimes everyone doesn't hear what is said and it could be useful to stop confusion with the lyrics at all.
Overall - Very well done and I can't really think of anything to critique on your submission other than the few minor things that I talked about. Good job and keep up the good work.
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thanks alot for a great review :D
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Theme song request: Hip Hop 
