Not too bad
Well, it's a bit better than the first loop I reviewed, so a good point for you. The melody was more interesting and used more notes, I can see another improvement here. Though, I noticed that the drums and the melody were not well synchronized, did you play the instruments yourself through a Midi Keyboard? The melody sounded a bit muffled also, try to add some high frequencies to make it brighter.
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and I said not to mention the drums and melodies being out of sync.
Thanks for the present but ...
Put more effort on your song next time. There was no structure and it was overall very messy. There was only one note and not even a chord, also the bit was random and it gets annoying at the first listen. And as Haggard said, it doesn't loop well, so work on it please.
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Haggard said it DOES loop well, not DOESN'T
Good job.
Very catchy tune here if I may say so myself. Everything about the song was pretty good. It was kind of short and I wouldn't mind seeing it just a little bit longer, but if you were to make it longer you may run into the problem of making it too repetitive. So if you could make it longer without making it too repetitive than I say go on and do it, but if you can't there isn't anything wrong with this one really.
Overall, perhaps just a bit short, but not too short. A very fun submission to listen to.
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Hmmm, i don't think i can make it longer without getting repetitive. Maybe in the future :-)
Thanks for the review!
Pretty good.
It has a little bit of a different sound to it, but I think it would be pretty good background music for a lot of flash movies or games. From simple introduction music or probably music in the background of a battle or a similar type scene. If I ever have the need for a song like that I will come back and try this out to see if it fits. I would say that my favorite part of the song would easily be the drums.
Overall, a good job all around and hopefully someone finds use for it in a flash movie or game.
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Thanks :-)
So far none of my music has been used in flash.
The chances that someone will use this are not great, but i'll just keep submitting songs and hoping they will get used/famous :P
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I liked it.
I liked the way that this song sounded. Perhaps it sounded a bit off, but I think that it's ok in this song. It sounds more like you were trying to get rid of the traditional techno song and give it a little bit of a different sound and I think you did it pretty well. As I liked the sound of the song my girlfriend didn't. :P And I quote her directly.
ok, but im telling ya.. it sounds like an annoying fly flying around your head like at night when you want to fucking kill it but you can't and it pisses you off. the song didn't piss me off, just reminds me of it. hahaha
I can kind of see where she is coming from, but I wouldn't have saw it that way unless she said something about it. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. It never gets too repetitive or anything and you had quite a bit of variety in it.
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Lol tell her I can hear what she means. lol pretty funny.
Thanks for the review!
Terrible.
Sounds like girl music to me. Did you happen to make this theme for a girl? Or just a wussy. ;P
Joking of course. Rohan is a good guy. And this is a good song so it seems pretty fitting in my opinion. I love the mix of metal and classical here. I also love the fact that it's heavy at times and lighter at others. Heyyy why did this turn out so much better than mine? Was it because you actually think Rohan is better then me or just because I'm not worth having a good song all together. :P Of course a joke again, but yes this turned out very well.
So now respond to my review calling me names please.
Haha, nice review thanks. And YEAH I made a better song for him because he is a better guy :P. Kidding, you both are great <3. The mix between classical and metal was not intentional at the beginning and but that little classical lick came to my fingers and it sounded pretty good : ).
And also, you can't tell this one turned much better because your theme has some killer vocals by Bad-Man :P.
Thanks again for the review <3
Hmm.
I think it could be a lot better than it was. It kind of sounded empty like it could have used a lot more variety. It wasn't bad quality though. It was rather short for what you had, which may be one of the reasons that I felt it was empty. Like I said, the only thing that I can think about is perhaps adding a couple of different instruments or just a different sound to it all together so it's just not basically the same thing playing over and over again.
Overall, repetitive and short. Kind of empty so it could probably use a couple of different sounds or instruments.
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lmao its a fucken loop
ofcouse its gonna be repitive
ima gonna agree that its short
thx for the review
Not too bad.
I enjoyed the introduction to it, but I guess it really just wasn't my type of music that I enjoy listening too. Ha, for some reason it had a really Xmas sounding tune to it so it was kind of fun to listen to during the Xmas time and everything. (I don't know if you did that on purpose or not) The part that I did like was the part around 1:25 where you picked it up a little bit with the guitar. I think the submission could have used a little bit more of that. I also liked the way that you finished the song off.
Overall, I liked certain parts of the song, but I didn't really enjoy the overall sound to it. That's just my opinion of course though.
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It's an old song, but i guess it fits to xmas ^^ thanks for the review!
I could see it being used.
I could see it being used in a flash submission for a sad scene or for an introduction or for the credits. Pretty useful if anyone ever needed to use it. I has a sad tone to it and could probably be used in a sad flash for a small part. I don't think it would be too good for an entire theme or for a major part. I thought it was kind of quiet, which didn't really matter too much because I just turned my volume up and it could have just been the speakers on my computer too so I obviously I won't take anything away from it because of that.
Overall, probably useful for a flash if somebody actually finds use for it. Probably a sad scene or an introduction.
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Ya i thought about putting it in my own but i havent got around to do so
thx 4 ta review
Not too bad.
In my opinion it has a little bit different sound to it than most dance songs, which is good because you usually hear the same generic dance tune all of the time. It kind of seems a little empty like there could be a little bit more going on in the song to make it more interesting. Just the same sound over and over made it a little bit repetitive. Perhaps something at the end of the song could have made it more interesting like a series of tunes and notes to end the song on instead of the same thing that you used during the entire thing. Maybe that or just mixing it up more in the middle would have added more variety.
Overall, just kind of empty and repetitive.
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Aye, well, bear in mind it was meant to be a challenge to improve my skills with the Sytrus, and variety is so hard to come by with one channel songs. :(
But still, you're right. I could've let it build up more slowly, and add some more rhythm.
Thanks for the review, once again! ;)
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