Fro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Its a Tank!]

Lmao

How do you get the video such high quality? When I put a video into flash it messes with the audio and makes it unsynced. Is there a trick to this?

The movie was awesome let alone high quality. I laughed during the entire thing. A nice bit of animation in there too with P-Bot. That was great stuff there too.

The way you presented the Tank being born out of P-Bot was hilarious. Great concept and great presentation all around.

[No Name Stick 2 ( L.I.P)]

Needs work.

~ Animation/Graphics ~

The Good Points - The backgrounds that you had were pretty good and you used good colors in the flash for the most part. Sometimes the drawings of your sticks were decent.

The Bad Points - You barely had any animation so in the future I recommend you add more actual animation to the flash. Most of the drawings were done very poorly and really need a lot of work. The animation that you did have wasn't too good. When the red text was on the brown background I had to strain my eyes to read it.

~ Story/Content ~

The Good Points - You had pretty good story behind the flash. Sadly I haven't seen the first one so I don't really know too much about the storyline itself, but from what I can see is that you have done a pretty good job with the story.

The Bad Points - I really didn't enjoy clicking after every time they said something. I much rather have a space button to push instead of clicking a button every time. Even more than that I rather see you make the characters talk by animating their mouths and by using a voice actor.

~ Audio ~

The Good Points - The music that you used wasn't too bad.

The Bad Points - I really didn't think that music that you did choose was a good choice for the flash even if it was an alright song. I think you should visit the audio portal of newgrounds. Link below. (Take out any spaces that may be created)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/

I also think that you should have included sound effects and voices to make the flash much more interesting.

~ Overall ~

You should really take your time and listen to some of the review you have. If you do you could turn this into a pretty decent series. Good luck and keep up the hard work.

~ Review Request Club ~

GokUC responds:

thanks for you review!