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[Join The Red Bull Collab!]

Nicely done.

Animation/Graphics - Very nicely drawn and animated. If the collab is full of things like this then I'm sure it will end up being very good. The animation was really smooth.

Story/Concept - I've always seen some advertisement flashes like this before, but I never really saw one that was this well animated. So of course if I was good with flash I wouldn't think twice about joining this collab. Of course I'm not so you don't have to worry about me joining. :P

Audio - Good audio and good sound effects all around.

Overall - A good advertisement and I hope that your collab turns out well.

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Vincoid responds:

Thanks a lot Corky, I appreciate it.

I'll probably be animating a few parts for the collab myself, and I trust the quality of the entire thing will turn out great.

Too bad you're not an animator, though you make it up by being generally awesome :P

Thanks again for the review and the compliments ;D

[Warthog flash project]

Not bad.

Animation/Graphics - The animation wasn't too bad itself. I recommend working on the small animations sometimes though. Things that can really add to a flash such as the legs walking as a part of your flash. Or arm movements. You had the very basic tweens it looked like. I myself haven't mastered walking or things like that yet, so as you probably know and as I know, they take practice. A couple of things could have been a little bit better drawn such as the button that you had us push.

Story/Concept - I like the Respawn button instead of the play button, and the fact that you had us push buttons that were actually from the game to advance into the flash. A little short, but I see you had limited time. Probably getting in two or three kills before he died would have made the flash just a bit more interesting. It was just kind of your basic concept so far. Perhaps in the future you can develop a story line.

Audio - I actually didn't like the audio that you had chosen for this submission. Was there a certain reason you choice that? Oh well, it's just my opinion that it didn't fit the flash very well. Other things like sound effects were pretty decent.

Overall - Very basic, very simple, etc... I'm sure if you had more time on this that you could have gotten more done and everything. Keep working and practicing and I'm sure your flash skills will improve.

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Hybrid-Of-Souls responds:

Animation/graphics - getting the movement to look better probably would've taken a lof of time, given the limited time I had to work against.

Story/concept - I was even thinking of having the driver run someone over, but I didn't go through with it for some reason...eh...

Audio - I didn't want to include the typical music, so I went 8-bit. Sorry you didn't like it though.

Overall - Thanks for reviewing.

[My Zelda Cd-i cutscenes]

Your flashes...

Are so hard to review. D: It's extremely hard to review someones flashes when they are making them bad on purpose. Apparently the game was bad or something and you were just making fun of how bad it was, but it's still not entertaining to watch whatsoever. Some of your flashes have made me laugh before, but this really had no humor in it at all. Again, perhaps to someone that has played the game before, but not to me.

The animation for the most part wasn't very good. The drawings were very rough and very simple. Again, I know that you were doing this on purpose, but usually it should be funny in someway. I just couldn't find how it was.

Of course there really isn't any story or anything behind it. That's probably because of the poor audio, which again you did on purpose, but it was so bad that I could only understand the word "map" during the entire thing.

Anyway, it's extremely hard to review and it's a pain to review.

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[The Many Mario's Collab]

Good collab.

Animation/Graphics - Pretty good. The ones that were sprites were done pretty smoothly and I really enjoyed the ones that were drawn. Almost all of them, if not all of them, were perfectly fine in terms of animation and graphics. You really got a good handful of artists here.

Story/Content - I'd have to say that my favorite scene was the one with the toys. I'd like to see that scene go on a little bit longer because it was probably the best. Some weren't the best, but most were done pretty well. Most were pretty humorous too. So good job all around to everyone.

Audio - For the most part the voice acting was good. I thought that it was better in a couple of places than others. The sound effects and music was synced up pretty well.

Overall - A good collab with a couple of funny scenes in it. Probably worth a 10 and I'm going to give it a 10.

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[Madness 003. Part 2.]

Needs a lot of work.

Animation/Graphics - Things weren't done very well here at all. The pictures, as it seems you have used pictures and not sprites, are of bad quality. Next time make sprites or just simple find a sprite sheet of madness somewhere online. I think that the picture was kind of too zoomed out during the regular fight too. I do like how you zoomed in during a part of the fight, but the quality of the picture was twice as bad when you did zoom in. The animation itself was smooth now and then, but for the most part it really needed to be worked on. Kind of choppy and not very smooth at all.

Story/Content - Why make this? It's exactly like 1,000 other submissions on this site. I understand if you are just practicing, but there isn't any reason to submit this unless you want to see how much you have improved since you have started making flash or something like that. That being said the submission was too short. This is a two part submission and even if you put the two parts together it is still way to short. Perhaps you should put together about 10 episodes or maybe even more before submitting them. And their really isn't any story at all. Perhaps actually adding one instead of the generic Madness fight would set your flash apart from the other thousands of Madness submissions on this site.

Audio - The audio wasn't timed well at all. It could have used better timing and probably the music too. A nice Madness theme song in the background wouldn't hurt or anything. Naturally with a longer flash you would need more audio and more music so in the future this section of your flash could be a little bit better, but only if you sync it much better.

Overall - The animation/graphics are pretty bad and need work on, their needs to be something that sets it apart from the other thousands of Madness movies, and the audio needs to be worked on to make it better.

Good luck on any upcoming flash submissions.

[Ngpros N' Ngnoobs]

Not that bad.

Animation/Graphics - The animation actually wasn't too bad. Very smooth actually. The drawings were very simple, but that's exactly what was needed in this flash. The colors used were perfectly fine and I rather the blank white background in this submission. It gives it the simple touch that it needs.

Story - I did laugh. It was a pretty funny flash all around. The idea was pretty funny because that is almost exactly what a NG noob sounds like. Actually it is exactly what one would sound like. It sounds like me to be honest in terms of knowledge of flash. (I suck at flash, I would love to be able to make something as good as this)

Audio - The Noobs voice was rather funny. Perhaps that's what made me laugh during the submission also. The other voice was pretty good. Kind of laid back and calm.

Overall - Not a bad flash and pretty comical. Worth a watch in my opinion.

Phalanx responds:

Thanks man.

[Alucard vs Richter: SOTN - Rhapsody of Ruin]

Really good.

Animation/Graphics - As you may remember from my last review I really do enjoy sprite animations so of course I enjoyed the graphics and everything. The animation was also very smooth so well done.

Story/Content - The story may be used a lot, but I think you presented it in a pretty good way. I enjoyed the fighting scenes and I think that you mixed it up enough so it wasn't too boring for the audience.

Audio - Sound effects, music and voices were done good in this flash. Great job all around.

Overall - Pretty good. I apologize for the lack of detail in the review, but I'm being rushed as I have to complete these reviews while I have the time.

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RopeDrink responds:

Any constructive review is welcome, long or short - And thank you for yours ^^

Im glad people have enjoyed this, I really am. I've poured over some of the work supplied on NG by other users (sprite fights and such) and there is so much on this site that outshines mine by miles. But as long as people enjoy this, I couldn't ask for more.

Thank you!