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[Random Crap the Movie]

what

Lol what was going on here?

Animation/Graphics - Very poor. Probably some of the poorest stuff that you have animated yet. =P Drawings and animation needs to be worked on a lot and they need to be much smoother.

Story/Content - I really had no clue what was going on here at all. I see that it was called Random Crap, etc.. and I guess that is a good title because it was so random that I really couldn't even tell what just happened on the screen.

Audio - The talking was way too slow. That was weird. The talking not only needs to be a lot quicker, but it needs to be done by a real person with a mic. Who the hell screamed? That was a pretty vicious scream man. It kind of scared me I wasn't ready for it.

Overall - Random as hell.

[Can you guess who he is?]

Gregory Washington Bonbon

This is obviously Gregory Washington Bonbon and I think everyone with some common sense can realize this.

Animation/Graphics - Not too bad, but not the best. I think they do good enough for the flash though. It kind of reminded of a Mario animation with the way he jumped on those things.

Story/Content - A decent idea for a flash. I think this could be a decent series. The flash itself needs to be a little bit longer with more clues in it and perhaps some sort of reward system when people guess right. Again, not a bad concept for a flash.

Audio - Your audio still isn't working? Blah, this flash really needed some audio, especially during the little dance scene that he had. You needed some sort of dance or disco music there. The scene where he is jumping on the things there need to be some sort of music such as Mario music.

Overall - A decent concept that probably needs to be a bit longer and include more tips.

[Life Cycle of a FLA Doc]

Lol not bad.

Animation/Graphics - These need to be worked on a little bit. Perhaps just clean up the drawings a little bit and thats pretty much all that needs done. Such as drawing the person a little bit better and giving him some animation such as his eyes moving a little bit or something like that.

Story/Content - A great job all around here man. A great concept and a really good idea for a flash animation. I always like these newgrounds/flash related movies. I do think perhaps you could have made the the setting look a little bit more like the newgrounds website.

Audio - N/A Even if you couldn't put some music or sound on your flashes perhaps you could have had someone else do it because no sound makes this one not as good as it could be. :(

Overall - Figure out way to get sound on it and work on the drawing in the flash.

[ADITLOY 2 - Newcomer]

Needs a lot of work to be good.

Animation/Graphics - First off the animation itself needs to be worked on. Things like the walking could be worked on greatly. That's really the biggest thing in terms of animation. The drawing also needs to be done a lot better. If the drawing was worked on this flash would seem like much better quality. The background, the characters, and generally most of the things that were drawn in this flash need to be worked on to an extent.

Story/Content - Another great concept. You do have a lot of good ideas when it comes to flashes. Weren't you going to include me in one of these man? I could have done voices and everything for it. Even though my mic doesn't work on my computer anymore. The story wasn't too bad. Kind of a nice flash to sit back and relax when you are watching.

Audio - This really needs a lot of work. Was that your voice that I heard? Anyway, sometimes the voice was really loud and sometimes the voice was really quiet. Sometimes the quality of the voices were alright and somtimes the quality of the voices sounded like shit. When there is static it just means the person has to back off of the mic and talk loud and clear. The voices need a lot of work.

Overall - If the drawing, animation, and voices were better in this flash I wouldn't doubt that it would get some sort of award whether it be a daily award or one of the RCP or underdog awards.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[[L7C]QuestForLevel60-Day5]

Slow claps.

That was beautiful.

Animation/Graphics - Pretty smooth work all around with these sprites. I enjoy watching sprite animations because they always bring back good memories of playing games like Mario or Sonic. The only animation that I think you need to work on is the jumping animation. He just kind of floated there too long and he jumps way too far when he did. I think it was just a little bit of lazy animation there. =P Also, sometimes he would still be running while he jumped. That's also something that should have been fixed and seemed just a little lazy.

Story/Content - I remember seeing this flash when you submitted it I think. I really love the concept of this flash and think you should continue it. It's a really good idea, especially when you put effort into it like this. With each level the flash should be a little bit longer and a little bit harder for Mario to be successful in.

Audio - The pokemon music really made me laugh here. ^^ The audio and sound effects were perfectly fine and well synced. Good job all around.

Overall - Probably would be one of my favorite series if you continued them successfully like this one.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[The Pie Collab!]

Fucking awesome.

This is by far one of your best submissions that I have ever seen.

Animation/Graphics - The animation and the graphics were alright for the most part. Chaz-o's drawings and animation was very smooth and well done as Yoshi's parts weren't the best done, but still kind of neat in their own style. Probably the smoothness animation from any of your flashes though.

Story/Content - Ha, a pretty good idea for a collab like this. I enjoyed it. I think that you could have had a couple more scenes, but for the most part the length of the submission was pretty good. I also loved the one by Chaz-o, which resulted in heavy metal music and the don't trust random pies thing. I liked the joke that Yoshi made about Pi. That was a good one.

Audio - Pretty good sound effects and music. Nothing really to complain about here really. Perhaps you could have used some voices, but that's really the only thing to fix with the audio part.

Overall - A great collab. Why don't you make more of these?

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[Music Video Collab 2]

Nice job guys.

Animation/Graphics - This was a very good job at animating on almost every single part. Maybe not every single one, but almost. You had a lot of talented flash artists in this collab and it really helped the collab flourish. I liked the way the menu was set up on the Ipod. There was a little glitch at the end where some name popped up towards the end, but it wasn't up there long enough to see what it said.

Story/Content - It's a great idea for a collab. Things ran pretty smoothly together and everyone had a pretty good concept to go with the song. Again, not every concept was the best, but for the most part it was pretty good. I sadly couldn't find any easter egss. I'm terrible at that kind of thing. :(

Audio - This had a great selection of songs, which all went well with the animation, but there was a small problem. Two of the songs, if I'm remembering correctly, were very low in volume. To the point where I had to turn my volume way up just to hear them and when the next part came on the music was super load as a result of me turning the volume up. I recommend making the songs louder on these sections so people don't have to go through this.

Overall - A very good job with just a couple of simple mistakes.

~ Review Request Club ~

Assios responds:

Whoa, thank you! Good and detailed review! :D

[The Unfinished Collab]

Something about this..

Something about this just seemed.. unfinished. I can't put my finger on it. ;)

Animation/Graphics - For the most part I think a lot of the contributers of this collab need to work on their drawing and/or animating skills just a little bit. Most were rough and/or not animated very smoothly or drawn very smoothly. That's not speaking for all of them though. I did enjoy some of them and though some of them were very well animated and drawn. The best in my opinion is probably the Blackman one. =P

Story/Content - A good idea for a collab. If I would have known about it then I could have probably added something too. =P I don't have time for collabs really though. Again, some were boring, but for the most part there were a lot of interesting/funny/even racist parts in their. =) I like the menu where you had the numbers keep going without anything there. Very smart.

Audio - I understand that this is suppose to be unfinished and everything, but I think the ones that didn't include sounds on their pieces should have included something because theirs were just a bit more boring than the others. I also think there should have been some sort of background music on the menu and in between scenes.

Overall - A good idea and a good presentation. Only a couple of things here and there that I didn't really like about it, but generally it was a good collab.

~ Review Request Club ~

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review!

In response to the lack of audio in the menu, I did try to put it in, but it completely messed up...

[How to be leet.]

Lol

Animation/Graphics - Not bad at all. I liked your style of animation and the color that you used for the background fit perfectly for the animation and the audio that you had chosen. I do think that the writing went by way to quickly. I think that's really the only thing that can be improved on this submission at all actually. I think just slow down the scenes a little bit with the text so we can read everything and the rest of the flash looks pretty good fast pace like it is.

Story/Content - It made me laugh, which is always a plus. It's a little short, but thats fine because the flash looks good fast paced. I do think though that when/if you make the text slower that the flash would last a little bit longer helping it out in the length department a little bit. Maybe a couple more examples than the ones that you had, but for the most part it was pretty good here.

Audio - I liked the audio that you used. It worked very well with the color that you used for the background and just for the entire flash in general. I like that there isn't any voices or sound effects just like the old fashion type of films that you were trying to resemble here.

Overall - Just the text slowing down a little bit and this would be a better submission. Good job on getting Frontpage and good job on getting the award.

~ Review Request Club ~

[Rubiks Cube]

Nice style here.

Animation/Graphics - You have a really nice style of animation here. The animation was pretty smooth and fun to watch. The drawings were also done very well and in your own special style, which usually makes the graphics original and better to watch. Good job all around here. I liked your animated replay button also. =P

Story/Content - Woah, is that a movie? Ha, so Chester it was your birthday and someone sent you a rubiks cube and a happy birthday note or something? Or is it just suppose to be random and not made for any specific reason? Either way, I usually enjoy watching birthday flashes. =P

Audio - I thought the audio could have been a tad louder. It could be just my speakers, my bad ears, or maybe the music really was quiet, but I had to turn my volume all the way up to get a good listen to it. Not bad though and a nice selection of background music.

Overall - Not too bad. Maybe the storyline could have been worked on a little bit in your author comments or something so we kind of knew what the flash was about and perhaps you could have had the person play with the rubiks cube and when he figured it out the note appeared or something.

~ Review Request Club ~

ChillyCheese responds:

Thanks, for the music thing, it actually is fairly loud on my computer.

I cant really think of what to respond for all of this, but don't think that I dont listen to what you're saying, I just cant really show any appreciation beside giving a..

-Thanks.