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[Ghost Motel 4 Outtakes]

Lmao

Animation/Graphics - Good like always. Everything was just a tad bit better in this one and you had a lot of actual animation.

Story/Content - I fucking loved this. It was probably one of the funniest episodes that I have watched in a long time. Just the way that you guys bashed that reviewer for leaving a dumb review. Haha, it makes me want to make a flash just to bash on the reviewers from my flashes. That's awesome. Just the concept of it is amazing. There were a lot of things to choose from on this flash and a lot of the stuff was funny. Some of it wasn't so funny, but it looked like you were trying too hard to make some of the things funny, but the things that were funny outnumbered the things that weren't.

Audio - Voice acting was alright again. I can see that you are getting a little better with the voices on the ghosts, but the Riddler's voice wasn't very good for some parts. Some parts sounded like they had a lot of static when he talked. Something that can be worked on a little bit by backing away from the mic and talking loud/clear.

Overall - One of my favorites in this series and I think it's funny enough to make my favorites list. Good job all around here.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thank you, we had fun making this one.

[-Broken-]

Not bad at all.

I struggled between a 6 and a 7, but I feel like giving it a 7. =P

Animation/Graphics - The drawing style that you have is interesting. It's very simple, but yet it gets the job done. Sometimes simple is all that you needed in this flash I think the simple drawings and animation was good enough. Great sad colors and everything. The plain background gives you the feeling of emptiness, which I think you were going for with it. The walking style made me smile a little bit, but again it was an interesting style of animation.

Story/Content - I think you could have improved this by a lot. I get what you are trying to do by showing the sadness and everything, but it's a little too short content wise. I think you should have added more things that went by in the backgrounds such as sad memories that he had or things like a couple holding hands, which just makes his sadness/loneliness even deeper than it was before.

Audio - Maybe a few more sounds effects, but that would come with adding more content to the flash if you so choose to. I think that the song that you chose was a very good one and I might have to stop by the audio portal and review it sometime. It really set the mood for the flash.

Overall - I think it was pretty good, but it would be really good if you added more content to it. Not only does this make it longer, but it can really add to the sadness of the submission and everything.

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Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review! That was some really great criticism which I certainly may take into account for future flashes..

[lalalooloo]

Hmm...

Animation/Graphics - Not too good at all. A couple of random drawings that look like they have been tweened together, which loop... Nothing really here to comment on other than the drawings need to be done much better and the animation needs to be much smoother.

Story/Content - A few random pictures.. again nothing really to comment about here. When a stickman falling on a sharp object and dies is the main content to your flash, which doesn't last more than a couple of seconds before it loops than you know you are really lacking on content. Even if a flash doesn't have a story.. this really didn't have much of anything at all.

Audio - Woo, 1 point for adding some nice audio, but sadly nice audio doesn't make a nice flash submission.

Overall - You could just change the Genre of this to Spam to give it a better classification because that's basically what it is, whether you meant it to be or not. If this was a serious submission then you need to add many more scenes to your loop and work on the animation and graphics a lot.

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mikkim responds:

no, they wern't tweened. and the animation IS smooth. AND IT'S ACTION, NOT SPAM! }:>(

[Cows Pooping]

Lol

Animation/Graphics - Very nicely done. Smooth animation and smooth drawings. Colors were very full and everything seemed very fitting in the flash. The backgrounds, cow, the act of pooping, etc.. Pretty good all around.

Story - A very short film, but still it made me laugh. The thing is it was exactly what I thought it was going to be and for some reason it still caught me by complete surprise, which is weird since I knew it was coming. Ha, other than being so short there really isn't much more to critique here.

Audio - Nice audio here. I think the biggest reason that the whole flash caught me by surprise was because of the intensity of the noise that the pooping made. >.< Ha, I do think that you should have changed the music up a little bit though when the cow did poop to something more evil or something of the sort. Just changing it up a little bit would have sounded better in my opinion.

Overall - A very funny submission for the content that is in it. Probably deserve a little bit of a higher score than it has.

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Imacow responds:

Thanks, pretty low score for this. It's all about the way you present it which is pretty depressing.

[Happy Birthday Yoshi77777]

HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY

Birthday to you. So he is finally old enough to be on this site now? Nice. ;) Ha, hope its a good one. Oh yeah, good flash and everything too, etc..

Elite-Sniper responds:

This was my first ever one-framer.

[Laser collection]

Insert title of review here

Ah, nice to see you used my idea here. Good simple humor that anyone can enjoy. It probably should have been a bit longer and you should have added a bunch of other scenes. I already gave you all of my ideas, but perhaps try and get some from other people for a longer amount of time so you can improve on it. Also, something like a scene selection probably would have made the flash better and if someone thought a particular scene was funny they could go back and play it again. The scene that I thought was the funniest was the last scene where you thought that the guy was going to laser the tree, but instead the tree lasered him. Good job on the surprise there. ^^ Hmm, anyway a free ten out of ten because I did help you a little bit by giving you the idea for the rocket and everything. ;)

[Ghost Motel 3]

A lot better!

Comments before actual review - A great improvement from the last two. Great job guys.

Animation/Graphics - Wow, much better than the last two episodes. The quality of the animation was much better and the drawings were much cleaner. Great job on improving these things in such a short amount of time between episodes.

Story/Content - A little less interactivity in these ones, but still a great job making sure there was something involved there. The story just keeps getting better and better. You guys did a really good job getting me involved in this series.

Audio - The voices were much better and much clearer. They weren't the same robotic dry voices that you used in the first two.

Overall - An amazing improvement from the first two to this one. I hope there is even more improvement to the next ones.

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Violet-AIM responds:

Thanks yeah we have always read reviews from each movie/game and try to improve on those points as much as we can, we also before each episode sit down and go over each script and see how we can improve the writing portion of it all.