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    Pretty good.

    Animation / Graphics - I understand that it was a sprite movie, but I really thought the animation was done well and ran together very smoothly. The backgrounds were nice, color was good, characters were good, etc.. Good job.

    Story - It's good to see a story line put up with a sprite movie. More times then not you see the simple battle scene with no story to it. You ended in a pretty good spot to start number two, which I hope you request for a review on so I can review it.

    Audio - The background music and the sound effects were nicely done. I also enjoyed the voice acting. Good job here.

    Overall, a great sprite move in which I hope you continue with the series good job.

    C52

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    mortis5000 responds:

    Thank You for the review... I am going to try my hardest to incorporate everything I did in this episode and make it better in the next one...

    Would of been great.

    Animation / Graphics - Great animation and great drawing. Pretty good all around. It might of been just a bit glitchy when the whale was flipping, but not to noticeable though.

    Story - I'm sure this would of been a great addition to the Music Video Collab. Too bad you didn't make it in time though. Oh well, it seemed to pass all by itself. There was a bit of humor in it too, so that helped your score a little. I mean it's not everyday you see a whale falling through the sky.

    Audio - This song couldn't of went any better with the animation. Good job.

    Overall, it's nothing too great by itself, but it would of been a great addition to the collab.

    C52

    Viridis responds:

    Thanks :D

    Funny.

    Animation / Graphics - Very well done. The animation was very smooth and the drawings/graphics were done just as good. Not too much to critique on here. Great job.

    Story - Funny, annoying ending, but funny. I was expecting something like that to happen. Like something was going to pop out that wasn't scary at all. So overall good story and good humor. Decent length too.

    Audio - Good audio, even though I tend to not like when those voices are used. The ending audio was a little annoying, but that was suppose to be like that.

    Overall, good job and it was pretty funny. I always thought that the lock legion was a spam crew, but this isn't spam at all.

    C52

    Krebskopf responds:

    that was a picture of me (;

    Ah, ha.

    Well I honestly don't know how to review this. I usually go through the same review all the time by reviewing the animation, the story, and the audio. Obviously there isn't any animation so I can't review that at all. There also isn't a story, oh wait, the adventures of the dog cleaning newgrounds screens off. I guess he would have to clean the windows up from newgrounds since everyone here is just fapping away all the time. I'm sure the windows are sort of dirty. I can review the audio, some type of crazy music could of been added here to make this even funnier. Well maybe I will try and make an attempt at what I just said in a format.

    Animation / Graphics - You have none. Yay.

    Story - Newgrounds has dirty windows and the dog was sent out to clean them. Good boy.

    Audio - I really think you could of added something here. This could of really made the flash.

    Overall, what the hell?

    C52

    Lotus responds:

    I'm thinking of adding audio now... but the possibilities are endless..

    I should put in some type of porn audio though...just for the lulz.

    Well this does need a lot of work.

    Animation / Graphics - First off I want you to understand that I'm not flaming you for your flash or anything. I just want to try and help you out for future submissions. This really didn't include animation at all except for the switching from one part to the next. The drawing and font wasn't organized and just seemed to be everywhere. I recommend slowing the text down, or even better yet adding a button that allows you to choose when to go on when you are done reading. I also recommend some kind of animation whether it just be the stick man moving in the beginning of the flash, or something more. Also, try and straighten up the text itself and organize it a little better.

    Story - Not too bad of an idea. I don't know if reading facts on a flash is something too exciting, but I have seen worse ideas. Maybe by adding more facts, a pre-loader, and a button which allows people to start over from the beginning would make this a lot better.

    Audio - Audio can really jazz up a flash animation. You can either add a song in the background or make a selection of songs on a menu that a user can choose from to their own liking. If you added buttons to go back and forth between the facts then you could add a little sound effect when you clicked it.

    Overall, this does need a lot of work, but hopefully you will take some of my suggestions into consideration when making a new flash or when updating this one. Good luck.

    - GS -

    C52

    Newgrounds Mafia.

    DPlato responds:

    thank you. you were a lot of help

    Nifty.

    Animation / Graphics - The animation and graphics themselves weren't that bad. I don't know if I liked such a small screen, but that doesn't really matter to you guys does it?

    Story - No story at all. Even if you were just trying to be random it wasn't a very good attempt. My guess is that you were trying to spam, just because I know that's what you guys do. And you accomplished that.

    Audio - You did have audio which is always a plus. You didn't have many chances to add audio since it was the same loop over and over.

    - GS -

    C52

    Newgrounds Mafia.

    LordZeebmork responds:

    EY TONY GIVE IM DA CEMENT BOOTS TONY

    FUCKIN RAT BASTARD ON OUR TURF

    Resemblence of Salad Fingers.

    Animation / Graphics - Actually not bad at all. Some parts I even really liked. If you worked on the animation and drawing just a bit more on your next submission it will get a better rating from me.

    Story - Looks like you were trying to make a Salad Fingers type of movie here. Not too bad, but the only thing I recommend is actually adding just a bit of a story to it like the other Salad Fingers movies. You never know you could make a decent little series out of it.

    Audio - There wasn't anything wrong with the audio as I can see. The voices were fine in my opinion.

    Overall, just work on your skills a little bit and work on the story and/or make it longer and I think you could make some decent flash. This really doesn't deserve to have a score this low.

    - GS -

    C52

    Newgrounds Mafia.

    Annannas responds:

    I know, i'm not so good in flash, i just tried :)
    Cus i enjoy David Firth's work.

    I can make a longer one, but it's so stressing that i have to add the
    graphics again and again for every sinlge scene!

    Got any flash tips?
    Tell me!

    Nice short sprite movie.

    Animation / Graphics - I know sprite movies aren't very hard to animate (Even though my only attempt at a sprite animation was blammed within seconds), but there wasn't anything wrong with this flash. Everything ran smoothly.

    Story - Nice funny short story here. Kind of makes me think back. That level is on almost every single Sonic video game isn't it? So it was kind of funny when he was complaining about being in the same place over and over.

    Audio - Nice music here, and nice fade out to the other song. The transition was pretty clean. Not to much more to say about the audio.

    Overall, not bad. I generally like sprite movies even though I can't make my own. Keep up the good work and if you submit any more movies to newgrounds give me a PM and I will be sure to stop by and review it.

    - GS -

    C52

    Newgrounds Mafia.

    Dante556 responds:

    Thanks dude

    I think Green Hill is mostly on every sonic game, but they change the name of it to verious different things, like Neo Green Hill Zone in Sonic Advanced and Emerald Hill in Sonic 2.

    Oh, and don't worry, i'll be sure to send you a PM once I make my next movie ;). Thanks for the review

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