Fro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Pirate Collab]

Fucking awesome.

The following review is probably going to be a lot shorter then my other reviews because there isn't much to do in a review on a type of movie like this except to praise it.

Animation / Graphics - In my opinion everyone did a great job here. I really enjoyed the stick fight, even though I don't remember the name of the person who did it. Great job to everyone in this category.

Story - Great story. I know it didn't follow a story line, but each scene was interesting and entertaining in it's own way. Another great job to everyone here too.

Audio - Not only did you have great music in the background, but the sound effects were all done well.

Overall, a great collab. I will be sure to show this to my girlfriend, she loves pirate related things.

C52

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Bertn responds:

Thanks for this very wonderful review. :D It made me happy. :3

[SF Series Episode 1]

Pretty good.

Animation / Graphics - I understand that it was a sprite movie, but I really thought the animation was done well and ran together very smoothly. The backgrounds were nice, color was good, characters were good, etc.. Good job.

Story - It's good to see a story line put up with a sprite movie. More times then not you see the simple battle scene with no story to it. You ended in a pretty good spot to start number two, which I hope you request for a review on so I can review it.

Audio - The background music and the sound effects were nicely done. I also enjoyed the voice acting. Good job here.

Overall, a great sprite move in which I hope you continue with the series good job.

C52

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mortis5000 responds:

Thank You for the review... I am going to try my hardest to incorporate everything I did in this episode and make it better in the next one...

[The Music Video Collab]

I thought it was great.

Animation / Graphics - I like that every authors personal touch was used when making this collab. Most of the animation and graphics were well done, but I did notice a couple of areas where things glitched or were just a bit jumpy. Sometimes the drawing wasn't done the best, but for the most part it was.

Story - This is a pretty good idea for a flash. I liked how you had the Bios section so we could get a basic background of all the authors. I really enjoyed the stuff done by Simple-line. A couple of scenes could of been longer and a couple of them could of been shortened up.

Audio - Well there's not much to say about the Audio when reviewing a music collab is there? Of course your audio was done well. Good job.

Overall, a couple of changes could of been made to make it better, but it was a decent flash and I enjoyed it.

C52

~Review Request Club~

Assios responds:

Thank you. Yeah, Simple-line made 5 good parts :)

[Bahamut's Favourite PMs]

I love it.

I don't know that I can compete with AnalPenguinFarming's review, but we all can't be reviewers like him I guess.

Animation / Graphics - Simple graphics and animation, but that's all that was really needed for this animation. The colors and back grounds were fine and everything pretty much ran smoothly.

Story - I honestly loved it. I thought it was hilarious. I laughed quite a bit during most of the movie and I thought it was a very original idea. I've never really seen a flash movie made about a subject like this at all, even though there might be one out there. I just haven't seen it if there is one.

Audio - Good audio all around. The voices were good and all of the other audio was just fine.

Overall, a very entertaining flash. It gets my 5/5 and my 10/10.

C52

~Review Request Club~

kinggila responds:

I think one other person has done this similar topic before, but that's it.

Thanks for that great review Corky! :)

[Free Falling Whale]

Would of been great.

Animation / Graphics - Great animation and great drawing. Pretty good all around. It might of been just a bit glitchy when the whale was flipping, but not to noticeable though.

Story - I'm sure this would of been a great addition to the Music Video Collab. Too bad you didn't make it in time though. Oh well, it seemed to pass all by itself. There was a bit of humor in it too, so that helped your score a little. I mean it's not everyday you see a whale falling through the sky.

Audio - This song couldn't of went any better with the animation. Good job.

Overall, it's nothing too great by itself, but it would of been a great addition to the collab.

C52

Viridis responds:

Thanks :D

[LL - The Ring]

Funny.

Animation / Graphics - Very well done. The animation was very smooth and the drawings/graphics were done just as good. Not too much to critique on here. Great job.

Story - Funny, annoying ending, but funny. I was expecting something like that to happen. Like something was going to pop out that wasn't scary at all. So overall good story and good humor. Decent length too.

Audio - Good audio, even though I tend to not like when those voices are used. The ending audio was a little annoying, but that was suppose to be like that.

Overall, good job and it was pretty funny. I always thought that the lock legion was a spam crew, but this isn't spam at all.

C52

Krebskopf responds:

that was a picture of me (;

[Clean it up!]

Ah, ha.

Well I honestly don't know how to review this. I usually go through the same review all the time by reviewing the animation, the story, and the audio. Obviously there isn't any animation so I can't review that at all. There also isn't a story, oh wait, the adventures of the dog cleaning newgrounds screens off. I guess he would have to clean the windows up from newgrounds since everyone here is just fapping away all the time. I'm sure the windows are sort of dirty. I can review the audio, some type of crazy music could of been added here to make this even funnier. Well maybe I will try and make an attempt at what I just said in a format.

Animation / Graphics - You have none. Yay.

Story - Newgrounds has dirty windows and the dog was sent out to clean them. Good boy.

Audio - I really think you could of added something here. This could of really made the flash.

Overall, what the hell?

C52

Lotus responds:

I'm thinking of adding audio now... but the possibilities are endless..

I should put in some type of porn audio though...just for the lulz.

[Crazy Laws: California 1]

Well this does need a lot of work.

Animation / Graphics - First off I want you to understand that I'm not flaming you for your flash or anything. I just want to try and help you out for future submissions. This really didn't include animation at all except for the switching from one part to the next. The drawing and font wasn't organized and just seemed to be everywhere. I recommend slowing the text down, or even better yet adding a button that allows you to choose when to go on when you are done reading. I also recommend some kind of animation whether it just be the stick man moving in the beginning of the flash, or something more. Also, try and straighten up the text itself and organize it a little better.

Story - Not too bad of an idea. I don't know if reading facts on a flash is something too exciting, but I have seen worse ideas. Maybe by adding more facts, a pre-loader, and a button which allows people to start over from the beginning would make this a lot better.

Audio - Audio can really jazz up a flash animation. You can either add a song in the background or make a selection of songs on a menu that a user can choose from to their own liking. If you added buttons to go back and forth between the facts then you could add a little sound effect when you clicked it.

Overall, this does need a lot of work, but hopefully you will take some of my suggestions into consideration when making a new flash or when updating this one. Good luck.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

DPlato responds:

thank you. you were a lot of help

[woopa]

Nifty.

Animation / Graphics - The animation and graphics themselves weren't that bad. I don't know if I liked such a small screen, but that doesn't really matter to you guys does it?

Story - No story at all. Even if you were just trying to be random it wasn't a very good attempt. My guess is that you were trying to spam, just because I know that's what you guys do. And you accomplished that.

Audio - You did have audio which is always a plus. You didn't have many chances to add audio since it was the same loop over and over.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

LordZeebmork responds:

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FUCKIN RAT BASTARD ON OUR TURF

[Drug Soup]

Resemblence of Salad Fingers.

Animation / Graphics - Actually not bad at all. Some parts I even really liked. If you worked on the animation and drawing just a bit more on your next submission it will get a better rating from me.

Story - Looks like you were trying to make a Salad Fingers type of movie here. Not too bad, but the only thing I recommend is actually adding just a bit of a story to it like the other Salad Fingers movies. You never know you could make a decent little series out of it.

Audio - There wasn't anything wrong with the audio as I can see. The voices were fine in my opinion.

Overall, just work on your skills a little bit and work on the story and/or make it longer and I think you could make some decent flash. This really doesn't deserve to have a score this low.

- GS -

C52

Newgrounds Mafia.

Annannas responds:

I know, i'm not so good in flash, i just tried :)
Cus i enjoy David Firth's work.

I can make a longer one, but it's so stressing that i have to add the
graphics again and again for every sinlge scene!

Got any flash tips?
Tell me!