Nice song
Very creative song all around. Very original and just good all around man. The lyrics were simply perfect and the vocals that followed them were pretty good also. I personally don't like the style, but I'll never let my personal opinion like that effect the score that I give a submission. Not many other genres tell a story so well anyway. :P
Good background music as well. The music would really built well for lyrics/vocals. The story that this tells is humorous to me, but might actually be motivational to others. The tan from the computer part was awesome because I know many people that spend that much time on the computer.
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