Interesting.
During the entire thing I enjoyed the guitar.
The first part was alright and it started out perfectly fine. I do think that it began to become quiet repetitive though with the same exact lyrics throughout the entire section. Perhaps changing up the lyrics a little bit to add more variety would make this part a little better.
The second part was quiet dreamlike I will admit. I do though think that the music overpowered the vocals. It sounds like that's the effect that you were going for, but it would still be nice if either the music was a tad quieter or if the vocals were just a bit louder so they were a little bit easier to understand.
The third part seemed to pick up a little bit, but at the same time remained to be relaxing and soothing. It was probably one of my more favorite parts of the song.
The fourth part was rather soothing throughout the entire part, but it seemed to be a bit glitchy. Again, I don't know if you meant it to be this way or if it was suppose to be this way, or even if it's just my computer messing up, but it did sound out of place a little. The voices here were just a tad bit quiet again, but I thought they were much clearer. I perhaps had sort of a weak ending, but it wasn't that bad.
Overall - The entire thing was pretty interesting. It changed up so many times that it never really good boring and it had a lot of variety in it. The length of the submission is very long. =P My computer had a hard time loading it, but I finally got it loaded.
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