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Blah, Blah, Blah, repeating what you've already heard the beginning was terrible and kind of hurt my ears. The rest of the song at hand really didn't have much structure. It really didn't have very good transitions as well as things just kind of ran together.
Some of the sounds that you had did sound very good though and you do have a base to make a decent song if you work out a few kinks here and there.
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Well I guess I have the same complaints as the other people had. The transitions were a bit rough and that's coming from someone that really doesn't know much about music, which means they were a bit obvious in this submission. :P
The song itself is pretty good though. It really reminds me of something where you would see a character discovering a wonderful world that he has never seen before and there isn't any limits on what he can do. It kind of goes with the title of the song as well.
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Yep, most people have been giving me the same advice, so I know which parts aren't working.
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This song contained everything that I enjoy in a classical type of song (even if you don't have it in that genre, the piano really gives it that feel). I love the strings and the piano here and it sounds really good in the song.
It was real fast paced and you had a lot of variety packed into such a short song. The only thing that I wish was better with this song was basically it's length. I felt like you could have made it a bit longer, but I really wouldn't call it a major problem.
Good job on the song all around.
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I liked this one very much and out of all of the requests in the Review Request Club this week (so far because I haven't finished them all yet) this one has been my favorite by far I think.
Very simple instruments, but they went very well with the song as a whole and with the vocals. The vocals were done very well and everything seemed to be of great quality!
As I can't really think of anything you can do to improve the song at hand I can tell you that it might help if you add the lyrics to your author comments as people can't always fully understand what people are singing sometimes.
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I love the beginning as it sounds like something counting down to the beginning of a race, which goes along perfect with the song title. Hm, what to review though? You've already stated that you knew the ending was a bit abrupt, that the middle of the song gets a bit repetitive, etc...
I think those two were the biggest "problems" of the song and that you should be able to fix them with a few edits here and there. The song itself is rather good though and doesn't exactly have the incomplete feel as it feels much more complete then most songs that people already consider complete.
So I would say just go with the changes that you planned on and you'll have a pretty good song here!
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Gotcha ^__^. It's good to know that all in all it isn't bad.
I'll give it the final touches soon.
Thanks Fro!
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Very interesting sound to this! The choir gave it a very interesting sound and you are pretty good with music so the two together ended up in a pretty good result.
I would like to see the actual lyrics in this submission though. I think that's really the only way you could improve the submission at hand other then I also noticed a couple of volume issues. Sometimes the volume seemed good and at other times it sounded too quiet, etc...
Pretty good though.
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I think it is being performed at the next recital so I will definitely have an actual recording soon. :) thank you for the review though
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I'm going to go right ahead and continue with the trend here and state that it sounds like it could basically be finished. I really don't know what else you could do with this without making it sound too busy and I personally wouldn't want it to get much longer if any longer at all as it could get a bit overdone after awhile.
If anything this could be shortened a bit. I think perhaps in the beginning you could have gotten quite of few seconds out of there. Almost even an entire minute off of the introduction and this song would sound much better already as the beginning was way too drawn out.
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thanks, taking out the minute would lose the atmosphere that I'm going for, although a few seconds cut wouldn't hurt.
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It starts off and right away I can tell that it is going to be a pretty good song all around. The drums really helped the song sound good and the song was great throughout almost the entire thing. The odd noise that you used towards the end of the song though... I didn't quite enjoy that. I thought it was very out of place and just too weird for the song at hand.
Where you put it was a great spot, but the sound itself just didn't sound that good in my opinion. Perhaps just a bit of a guitar solo their instead would have been a bit better instead of the sound effect used. :P (Don't know what it was lol)
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I must be missing what everyone else is seeing. I'm almost so certain that I'm missing it that I even gave it a bonus point on my rating. I guess there really wasn't much that I enjoyed about the song.
In the beginning it seemed like it was set up to be a decent song. Then it just kind of went on and on.. and on.. and on... and there wasn't really anything in it that made it an enjoyable song. In my opinion it was rather boring and really didn't contain anything to make me ever want to hear it again.
The quality itself really didn't take anything away though. Maybe the fact that the song was so long made me not enjoy it. To me personally I would probably have enjoyed it much more if 3 minutes were taken off of it or so. :/
So yeah, sorry for not enjoying your song and sorry for not really being able to figure out how to make it "better", but I gave my god honest opinion on it and you can't ask for much more can you?
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I have to admit that the quality of the music and the quality of the voices really ruined this submission for me. It sounded like it was going to be a pretty good song and I do enjoy the effects that you used very much, but I couldn't understand much if any of it as it was very static like and just plain hard to understand.
I know there isn't much you can do about that expect for getting some better recording equipment, but for this to sound good I highly recommend it. I'm giving you the benefit of the doubt that the song sounded good because personally from what I could make out it did.
For now though I recommend putting the lyrics on your author comments.
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