Not bad.
It's sort of short so I think you need to either add some length to the submission while keeping up good variety and not getting to repetitive or you could make it into a good loop. Again, this is another good audio for a flash submission perhaps during the introduction or the credits of the submission, but probably not during the animation itself.
Overall - I think it needs to be a little bit longer, but other than that it was a good submission to listen to.
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Damn static :P
Great build up effect during the song and pretty good variety throughout the entire thing. The static wasn't too bad in this one, but it still took away from the song a little bit. If the song was cleaned up perhaps it would be something good to use during the credits of a flash submission. A pretty good song to listen to though other than that noise.
Overall - Another good song that is only flawed by the static noise. So I know that you can make great audio. Good job and keep up the good work. (Try to get rid of the static in the future if you can, if you can't then I understand)
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Yeah, I hate it too :(
Thanks again though, all of your reviews are vey much appreciated.
Great job!
Awesome job all around. I really enjoyed listening to this song. It never really got too repetitive or boring. The entire thing was really fun to listen to. I could see this being used during the introduction of a flash submission. Perhaps something like the older times with knights, kings, wars, etc... It would be very useful for something like that.
Overall - I really don't think there is anything you could do to improve this song. It's really well done all around. Great job and keep up the good work.
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No suggestions :(.... It's ok. When I get the point where all of my songs are like that, then I'll be happy. I have yet to have one of my songs used in a flash though :(. Thanks for listening!
Not bad.
I think in the beginning that perhaps the background music was a little drowned out by the main music. I know you don't want the background stuff too loud, but I think it could have been just a little bit louder. I wish I could give you a higher score because this submission had decent variety in it and a good beat. (For what I could tell) But the static itself made it hard for me to tell for sure.
Giving you the benefit of the doubt I will give the submission a 7. I understand that sometimes things don't turn out as well as they should and this is one of those examples with the static noise.
Overall - Hopefully you can get the whole static thing fixed sometime because the song would probably be much better to listen to. Good luck on any future submissions.
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yeah, i'll definately try to adress the static, believe me it annoys me more than anyone :3
thanks again!
Not bad.
I thought it was very simplistic, perhaps a little bit too much though. I thought after awhile the song got very repetitive. It was a nice beat though and it was a pretty good song to listen to. I think perhaps it's something that would be pretty good to use over an introduction or maybe even the credits of a flash submission. Probably not so much as in a flash animation itself, but probably during the intro/credits.
Overall - Perhaps it needs a little bit more variety, but what you had was done well and might be useful in a flash some way. Good job and keep up the good work. Good luck on any future submissions.
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Thanks, I try, but there's always room for improvement, and your advice will be not go un noticed :)
Rock on man.
Yeah, this was pretty good. I have to say I can't wait to hear a version with vocals. I'm commanding you to get someone to put vocals on this. ;) Ha, I would, but that would make this complete shit since I can't sing or anything. The guitar and the drums were awesome during the entire thing. Loved how fast and hardcore the entire thing was. I added it right to my favorites.
If you happen to get someone to put vocals on this please do me a favor and send me a PM. Keep up the good work.
Glad to hear it ;) Ofcourse man. I'll try to see if I can find someone who will fit for the job. And If we get someone. I'll pm you.
Cheers n beers.
Not bad.
Honestly to me it sounds like it's your generic Techno track. Kind of gets repetitive after awhile and everything, but meh thats Techno for you. It's a pretty catchy tune and not bad to listen to at all. Congrats on having it used in a flash animation. I was going to say that this would probably be the perfect song to use in several different flash animations.
Overall - Not bad. It's probably going to be useful in a couple of flashes, in which the author is doing things such as shape changes or quick scenes where a lot of things are happening.
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Not bad.
Blah blah, let's get this part out of the way even though you obviously know. It was really quiet. Even when I turn my speakers up all of the way I have a hard time hearing it. Probably because I have a bad hearing problem and I'm almost deaf in both of my ears, whatever though. I finally got it loud enough by hooking it up to some other speakers. Pretty good voice acting voice in my opinion. I can't really see too much wrong with it at all. It was clear and crisp (when I got it loud enough to hear) Perhaps add the words in your author comments or something so people that are having problems hearing can make more sense of it if they can read along.
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Edited the comments, as per your suggestion - thanks for the input :)
Well
First good thing, it loops perfectly, at least you made it. Though, it was really annoying to be honest, maybe try to compose a more interesting chord progression, let the piano play proper chords or to add more melodies. Also the drums didn't fit the song, add a real solid beat - that snare fill was not even a beat. Keep on practising and you will get better with composition.
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Nice!
Good production here, I enjoyed most of the part of the song, so yeah :). The intro was really nice and I loved the chord progression, and that chromaticism at 0:13, so sweet! Nice effects on the piano and nice melodies, though I didn't really liked how the intro was very different of the intro - instruments-wise - other than that, I enjoyed it. Also one thing, it was a bit long in my opinion :P. Good job.
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