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Not too bad.

The introduction of the song, which was about the first twenty seconds in my opinion, was pretty repetitive and I thought that I was going to get bored quite quickly. It did pick up in the middle and seemed a bit "corky"... lmao I can't believe I actually use corky, but it seemed to fit in the situation. The end of the song was a little disappointing as it ended abruptly. I think maybe some sort of fade out or something else that wouldn't make it seem so sudden would make it a little bit better. Not too bad though and it is kind of a "fun" submission to listen to.

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LuciousClump responds:

Yah I've actually thought about shortening the beginning ,and the end of the song is really the beginning of the second song they kind of string together to make one big song
Well thx for the review bye

I enjoyed it.

This really sounded like an old fashion video game song. I think this would go great with an old style horror game or even some sort of old fashion RPG during a cave part or maybe even a battle. Great job. I'm starting to get interested in writing for a couple of RPG games so listening to some video game songs have been keeping me interested in the subject.

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Well.

I'm going to have to agree with everyone here when they said that the end was too abrupt and the static made it sound a bit bad. If you could work on the ending alone then I think the score of your audio would be much better! The guitar and the drums went together very well. The only other thing that could of been worked on a little bit more would be the length of the submission. If these things were worked on a bit then this would be a great submission.

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svere responds:

Thanks for the review! But to be honest, I like my songs short and simple.

Haha.

I'M GOING TO RAM THIS IN YOUR ASS. I didn't laugh until that part right there, but that part was pretty funny. Other then that I really didn't enjoy the submission too much. This was made for fun obviously, but only one part of it made me laugh. Ha, sounds like you through a bunch of shit together and by reading your other author responses that's exactly what you did. Ha, Jason Jason what a douchebag.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

IM GOING TO STICK MY DICK IN YOUR ASS JASON!

Great job.

This was a great audio submission you have made here! I think you made a great choice with putting it in the video game genre after having it in several other genres first. I think this would be great background music to an RPG game if it was just a bit quieter. Overall, a really good submission with great length and variation. Keep up the good work.

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svinepels responds:

Thanks! :D

Great job!

Not only is the audio really good, but you had a great description of it in your author comments. Of course there would many ways of describe it, but your description of the song in your author comments was right on the nose. I think the bird flying was just a bit better of an describe the song then the swimming on your back one for me though because the song did pick up a little bit and noted towards a little bit of action.

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Pretty good.

A point off because it was very quiet because even though my speakers were turned all of the way up I had a hard time hearing most of it. I just made sure it was quiet in the room that I was in and listened carefully. (I also have pretty bad hearing) It was pretty good all the way through. When it picked up towards the end it may have been a bit messy, but other then that a pretty good audio submission. Good job.

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MusicMyOxygen responds:

Thanks. I understand about the quietness though, so I can't blame you. And yes, I messed up once when the tempo picked up, thank you for taking the time to notice. I'm glad you thought it was pretty good.

Not bad.

I guess I can really imagine someone running away from something terrified when I listen to this. Like something scared them so bad that it's a frantic race to get away and their heart rate is up at the same time. Even though they are so frantic to get away they are crying at the same exact time. It was pretty good, but it was kind of short and did end sort of abruptly.

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DjCompass responds:

Ok, Thanks for the review, i think i definetly know what to fix with this one.

Good.

Great remax. I was playing this while my girlfriend was in the room and she tends to hate the audio from newgrounds. She said you did a really good job, so that must mean it is really good for her to like it. >.< I agree with her, but I do agree that it may have gotten just a tad bit messy starting with 2:10 seconds there for a little bit, but it wasn't too bad. Great build up in the beginning and great fade out echo effect you had in the end.

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p4c responds:

hehe yeah, that was a tough part to deal with, i tried to keep the thickness of the instrumentals while preserving that synth solo, so it was a hard balance of sacrificing instruments and layers, etc. thanks for looking, im glad you and your gf liked it :D

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