Not too bad.
The introduction of the song, which was about the first twenty seconds in my opinion, was pretty repetitive and I thought that I was going to get bored quite quickly. It did pick up in the middle and seemed a bit "corky"... lmao I can't believe I actually use corky, but it seemed to fit in the situation. The end of the song was a little disappointing as it ended abruptly. I think maybe some sort of fade out or something else that wouldn't make it seem so sudden would make it a little bit better. Not too bad though and it is kind of a "fun" submission to listen to.
C52
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