I liked it.
I liked the submission. I felt like it was a powerful submission. A couple of times it might have been a bit repetitive with the same noise over and over, but I don't think it was repetitive enough to take away from the submission at all. The song had a great build up and got really quick at some parts of the submission. It was a fast upbeat submission that could probably be used in a flash submission or two. Good job.
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Thanks :)
Hmm.
I don't think I really enjoyed it too much.. I just couldn't seem to for some reason. I thought the beginning was perfectly find, but it did start to build up a little bit, which did make the submission alright. After the initial build up it started build up again, which again helped the submission out a little bit, but it just seemed like either something was missing or that it just never got the that really good part. The song is in a mix between relaxing and quick, but never really gets to either of them. It's somewhere in the middle I guess.
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i appreciate the input, i didnt really have an objective when i started the song, so i guess thats wat makes this piece so weak.
Not too bad.
The introduction of the song, which was about the first twenty seconds in my opinion, was pretty repetitive and I thought that I was going to get bored quite quickly. It did pick up in the middle and seemed a bit "corky"... lmao I can't believe I actually use corky, but it seemed to fit in the situation. The end of the song was a little disappointing as it ended abruptly. I think maybe some sort of fade out or something else that wouldn't make it seem so sudden would make it a little bit better. Not too bad though and it is kind of a "fun" submission to listen to.
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Yah I've actually thought about shortening the beginning ,and the end of the song is really the beginning of the second song they kind of string together to make one big song
Well thx for the review bye
I enjoyed it.
This really sounded like an old fashion video game song. I think this would go great with an old style horror game or even some sort of old fashion RPG during a cave part or maybe even a battle. Great job. I'm starting to get interested in writing for a couple of RPG games so listening to some video game songs have been keeping me interested in the subject.
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Well.
I'm going to have to agree with everyone here when they said that the end was too abrupt and the static made it sound a bit bad. If you could work on the ending alone then I think the score of your audio would be much better! The guitar and the drums went together very well. The only other thing that could of been worked on a little bit more would be the length of the submission. If these things were worked on a bit then this would be a great submission.
C52
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Thanks for the review! But to be honest, I like my songs short and simple.
Haha.
I'M GOING TO RAM THIS IN YOUR ASS. I didn't laugh until that part right there, but that part was pretty funny. Other then that I really didn't enjoy the submission too much. This was made for fun obviously, but only one part of it made me laugh. Ha, sounds like you through a bunch of shit together and by reading your other author responses that's exactly what you did. Ha, Jason Jason what a douchebag.
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IM GOING TO STICK MY DICK IN YOUR ASS JASON!
Great job.
This was a great audio submission you have made here! I think you made a great choice with putting it in the video game genre after having it in several other genres first. I think this would be great background music to an RPG game if it was just a bit quieter. Overall, a really good submission with great length and variation. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks! :D
Great job!
Not only is the audio really good, but you had a great description of it in your author comments. Of course there would many ways of describe it, but your description of the song in your author comments was right on the nose. I think the bird flying was just a bit better of an describe the song then the swimming on your back one for me though because the song did pick up a little bit and noted towards a little bit of action.
C52
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Pretty good.
A point off because it was very quiet because even though my speakers were turned all of the way up I had a hard time hearing most of it. I just made sure it was quiet in the room that I was in and listened carefully. (I also have pretty bad hearing) It was pretty good all the way through. When it picked up towards the end it may have been a bit messy, but other then that a pretty good audio submission. Good job.
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Thanks. I understand about the quietness though, so I can't blame you. And yes, I messed up once when the tempo picked up, thank you for taking the time to notice. I'm glad you thought it was pretty good.
Wow.
First off, I didn't know you had audio Hacsev. If you would of PM'd me about it then I might of reviewed these when you first submitted them. Anyway, a great submission! I loved the upbeat fashion of it. I don't understand why it has so many downloads and such a high score, but hardly any reviews, but I guess that's why it was requested for reviews in the RRC (Review Request Club) in the first place. This is really a great submission and I don't think I could give any tips on how to improve this at all. Good job.
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Awesome! Thanks a lot, Corky!
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