Hmm..
This was kind of repetitive. To be honest the entire thing just sounded kind of out of place. It wasn't too bad though and I did have an alright time listening to it. I don't know what it was exactly about it, but things just sounded, like I said, out of place, like it didn't fit with the song very well. Also, perhaps changing it up a little bit and adding a little bit more variety. Not to say that you didn't mix it up a little bit in the song, but when you did it was still the same noise the enter time.