Not bad.
It was pretty good, especially for a demo. If this was just a demo then I'm sure the full version will turn out very well. Hoping to hear it soon. :) It was a pretty fast and upbeat song throughout the entire thing and it was very fun to listen too. I think the introduction was also nicely done. I don't really see what you could do to clean it up too much really, but maybe that's just because I don't know anything about music. :/ Overall, pretty good.
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