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[ADITLOY 1 - Pilot]

LOLOLOL

Hey weren't you going to make a series out of this? I remember the one time that you talked to me on AIM you said you were going to make a series out of Yoshi and his friends and that you were going to include me in it. =P What ever happened to that idea? I think it's a really good idea though! I wouldn't mind doing that, but what the hell does a Corky look like? Unless you could make me some custom Corky bobble head sprites I don't think I could come up with anything for me. This is a pretty good idea though and I like the basic idea behind it. Oh what I wouldn't do to be decent at flash. I would submit two flashes everyday for awhile probably. =P I loved the random explosion. That was pretty fucking random/epic. Nice job there.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[All Your Leet]

Beleive it or not. D:

This is one of your better animated movies. You really aren't that bad at making movies. If you would take your time I think you could create a pretty good flash someday. Therefor I can also make a review like I usually make reviews. =P

Animation/Graphics - Not the best, but I think all you had to do was work on the in between animation. Without it you didn't get any real animation. It's more like pictures that move here and there. Things like walking, mouth movement, etc.. Those are the things that make flashes good animation wise.

Story/Content - I liked the way the flash started off... then it got spammy towards the end. :( Believe it or not I have never saw the submission that you are tributing here. I will have to check it out to fully understand the humor in this submission. Well.. honestly to understand any of the humor. It's apparently famous here on newgrounds, but I haven't seen a lot of famous flashes.

Audio - The voices were alright, but needed to be better. These would be so much better with voice actors instead of those mechanical voices that you use. I can see where the pictures were going by and why the voices would be alright there though.

Overall - Starts off good and then gets spammy. Needed work on the in between animations such as walking and mouth movements and also needs voice actors instead of those other voices.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[{PS} IT's NOT spam U faG!]

Why am I reviewing this? =P

Well I'm going to review this because obviously you aren't the real Point Seclusion. You know why? Because this was so much better than any of their stuff that I have ever seen. The play button itself was so much better than any of their stuff. The menu that you created was so much better than any of their stuff. I think you guys could put them out of business because your work is so much better in every way. I rather look at pictures of penguins than I would read a bunch of "crazy laws". I know I'm coed on one or two of their flashes, but I had nothing to do with them and I'm not a part of their club. They were just flashes that won awards and we made some sort of trade off. Anyway, this is far from spam when you compare it to the real point seclusion flashes.

xPointSeclusionx responds:

Yeah, it's pretty weird that even through they have those 1000+ members, noone from them can do anything half-decent.

Thanks for a great review

[Koopa shell of doom]

Short and to the point.

Animation/Graphics - Very smooth. You have a way of making simple sprites look very good. I'm sure that has something to do with how you don't rush your submissions and you take your time.

Story/Content - Not bad at all. It was a quick simple scene. It really didn't make me laugh that much, but I think that was because it was just a bit predictable. It's like that's exactly what I knew was going to happen when looking at the title and putting two and two together. Still a good short submission that was fun to watch.

Audio - The audio was synced very well and went well with the animation. Good Mario music, sound effects, and that "waiting" song that you had on the 5 hours later text.

Overall - <3 ;)

ThePigeonMaster responds:

I really like your detailed reviews, it gives me all the things that I need to make myself better at animating :D

Thanks <3

[Nintendo Story ep 3]

Pretty good :D

Animation/Graphics - Not the best, but really not that bad at all. They could have used just a little bit of work. I'm not complaining though since I can't really come close to it.

Story/Content - Hmm, I don't really understand some of it. ^^ I loved the action so I guess that's really all that matters. I loved the fight with Mario that was really good. I loved the humor especially in the part where he pulls the turtle's head out of it's shell so it would get hit by the other turtle shell. Good stuff there. ^^The outtake scenes were pretty good. I think you should have made a lot more of those. They are always my favorites.

Audio - The audio used was good. The voices and sound effects were also fine. I think you should have added some simple Mario background music to the outtakes though.

Overall - Not the best in terms of animation and graphics, but it's generally a fun submission to watch.

Gustavos responds:

Well finally one of you gets around to reveiwing.

I didn't put background music in the outakes because the file size would be put way up, and it's big enough as it is. There's really not much to say to this reveiw. All these problems are ones I already took note of. But thanks anyway for reveiwing.