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[Warthog flash project]

Not bad.

Animation/Graphics - The animation wasn't too bad itself. I recommend working on the small animations sometimes though. Things that can really add to a flash such as the legs walking as a part of your flash. Or arm movements. You had the very basic tweens it looked like. I myself haven't mastered walking or things like that yet, so as you probably know and as I know, they take practice. A couple of things could have been a little bit better drawn such as the button that you had us push.

Story/Concept - I like the Respawn button instead of the play button, and the fact that you had us push buttons that were actually from the game to advance into the flash. A little short, but I see you had limited time. Probably getting in two or three kills before he died would have made the flash just a bit more interesting. It was just kind of your basic concept so far. Perhaps in the future you can develop a story line.

Audio - I actually didn't like the audio that you had chosen for this submission. Was there a certain reason you choice that? Oh well, it's just my opinion that it didn't fit the flash very well. Other things like sound effects were pretty decent.

Overall - Very basic, very simple, etc... I'm sure if you had more time on this that you could have gotten more done and everything. Keep working and practicing and I'm sure your flash skills will improve.

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Hybrid-Of-Souls responds:

Animation/graphics - getting the movement to look better probably would've taken a lof of time, given the limited time I had to work against.

Story/concept - I was even thinking of having the driver run someone over, but I didn't go through with it for some reason...eh...

Audio - I didn't want to include the typical music, so I went 8-bit. Sorry you didn't like it though.

Overall - Thanks for reviewing.

[Ngpros N' Ngnoobs]

Not that bad.

Animation/Graphics - The animation actually wasn't too bad. Very smooth actually. The drawings were very simple, but that's exactly what was needed in this flash. The colors used were perfectly fine and I rather the blank white background in this submission. It gives it the simple touch that it needs.

Story - I did laugh. It was a pretty funny flash all around. The idea was pretty funny because that is almost exactly what a NG noob sounds like. Actually it is exactly what one would sound like. It sounds like me to be honest in terms of knowledge of flash. (I suck at flash, I would love to be able to make something as good as this)

Audio - The Noobs voice was rather funny. Perhaps that's what made me laugh during the submission also. The other voice was pretty good. Kind of laid back and calm.

Overall - Not a bad flash and pretty comical. Worth a watch in my opinion.

Phalanx responds:

Thanks man.

[Alucard vs Richter: SOTN - Rhapsody of Ruin]

Really good.

Animation/Graphics - As you may remember from my last review I really do enjoy sprite animations so of course I enjoyed the graphics and everything. The animation was also very smooth so well done.

Story/Content - The story may be used a lot, but I think you presented it in a pretty good way. I enjoyed the fighting scenes and I think that you mixed it up enough so it wasn't too boring for the audience.

Audio - Sound effects, music and voices were done good in this flash. Great job all around.

Overall - Pretty good. I apologize for the lack of detail in the review, but I'm being rushed as I have to complete these reviews while I have the time.

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RopeDrink responds:

Any constructive review is welcome, long or short - And thank you for yours ^^

Im glad people have enjoyed this, I really am. I've poured over some of the work supplied on NG by other users (sprite fights and such) and there is so much on this site that outshines mine by miles. But as long as people enjoy this, I couldn't ask for more.

Thank you!

[Where the Missing Sock Go]

Pretty good.

First off sorry for the short review. I'm doing this on a schedule and they have to be done soon. :P

Animation/Graphics - The graphics weren't the best. Not terrible, but not the best. I do think they could be worked on a little bit. The animation though was done very well. Good job on that.

Story/Content - The concept was really good. Perhaps just a little simple, but there isn't anything wrong with simple. Some pretty good humor all around.

Audio - The music that you used was a great choice and sounded very good with the animation. Perhaps the transition of the audio could have been a little better, but not too bad.

Overall - Not too bad. An enjoyable flash. I wish I could have more time to go into depth with my review, but sadly I don't have the time.

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OxSox responds:

Even though your review is short it's still helpful. Thanks for the review!

[Frosty the...]

Not too bad.

Animation/Graphics - At first I was going to comment a little on your drawings here, but after reading your author comments I see that they were suppose to be the way they were because you were making it for a collab. I wouldn't mind seeing the same flash or a similar flash done in smoother drawings. The animation itself was pretty smooth though so no real complaints there.

Story/Content - A nice little parody flash here. Short and too the point. Too bad it was too long for the collab because I'm sure it would have been a great contribution to it. The jokes were ok, they didn't really make me laugh and I didn't find the flash all too humorous, but the little eggnog part at the end make me chuckle a little bit.

Audio - The voices were done very well and they were well synced with the animation of the mouths. I do think that you could have used a better sound effect for the walking though. It didn't really sound like he was walking on snow or ice. It didn't even sound like he was walking on anything for that matter. Perhaps something that sounds a little bit more crunchy would have worked better like we was walking on snow.

Overall - A nice short flash parody. Could have used some better sound effects, but for the most part was done well.

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thank you very much sir for the review. Looking back it would have been better like you said if I used better sound effects, but I am still glad you enjoyed the animation. Thanks again for the review.

[Cpt Falcon Checkup]

Lol

Animation/Graphics - Very well drawn and very well animated. Drawings were pretty good and the animation ran smoothly.

Story/Content - Ha, it's just one of those movies... where you know you know exactly what's going to happen and yet it still surprises you and makes you laugh when it does happen. Actually made me laugh out loud and everything when I watched this submission. It was short, but adding any length to it might even take away from it a little bit. Great quality and a small loading file, which makes me happy because I'm on Xmas break and only have dial up so the smaller the file the better for me.

Audio - Everything was good here. The voices were well done and the sound effects were well done. You did a good job syncing them up with the animation itself.

Overall - A pretty funny submission with great quality. Keep up the good work. 5'd

Zombie-Pimp responds:

lol what an awesome review. Thanks man