Fro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cpt Falcon Checkup]

Lol

Animation/Graphics - Very well drawn and very well animated. Drawings were pretty good and the animation ran smoothly.

Story/Content - Ha, it's just one of those movies... where you know you know exactly what's going to happen and yet it still surprises you and makes you laugh when it does happen. Actually made me laugh out loud and everything when I watched this submission. It was short, but adding any length to it might even take away from it a little bit. Great quality and a small loading file, which makes me happy because I'm on Xmas break and only have dial up so the smaller the file the better for me.

Audio - Everything was good here. The voices were well done and the sound effects were well done. You did a good job syncing them up with the animation itself.

Overall - A pretty funny submission with great quality. Keep up the good work. 5'd

Zombie-Pimp responds:

lol what an awesome review. Thanks man

[Killin' the Grade]

Lmao

Wait... fuck.. wait... so this is a rumor? It's not true? :( Oh god... what am I going to do with this fucking F in Economics. ; _ ;

Animation/Graphics - I loved the style. It got a little sloppy in some parts with the text in between scenes and everything, but I'm guess that's what you were going for. The animation is very smooth and the drawings are done very well. A lot better than most of the stuff on newgrounds already to be honest.

Story/Content - I loved this haha. But do you really get grades like this or not? I've heard both sides of the stories. I guess I might have to do some research. :S Even though I guess it doesn't really matter since I have a single room this semester and next semester my roommate is a good friend of mine and I rather him not die. It's a great idea for a flash though and you really brought the story out well with the animation. Nice quick scene with the ghost at the end.

Audio - I don't think you could have picked a better song for the flash. I liked the fact that there weren't any voices or sound effects in this flash. I think it worked better that way. Great job making the audio work that well with the flash.

Overall - I hope to see more of your stuff requested in the review request club like this. I really enjoyed it. Great job.

~ Review Request Club ~

xthesnarfx responds:

Thanks man! That really means a lot coming from some one that watches a lot of movies here on newgrounds. I picked a song without any words in it to try to see if I could get my point across without any words. I think it worked pretty well. Also... Get that F up young man!

[TMB Episode 1 - 1/2]

I loved it.

Animation/Graphics - I happen to love sprites. :( Haha, but this wasn't a sprite movie. I happen to love it when people take should be sprites like Mario and animate/draw the characters themselves though. I like the personal style that you had in this flash. The animation was very smooth and the drawing style was perfectly fine.

Story/Content - I was like WTF when it started. Ha, you may want to change the settings a little bit even though it didn't show anything. You never know when a 8 year old who isn't suppose to be on newgrounds will come by and see this episode and learn about his penis the wrong way. D: Or is that the right way? Oh well, getting back on track now. A good start of a story and a interesting plot. I liked it very much and I hope you post your next part up in the review request club so I get a chance to see it.

Audio - Nice background music, sound effects, and voices all around here. The voices were well synced with the animation of the mouth and all of the animation in general.

Overall - A great submission. Perhaps could be just a little bit longer, but there isn't anything wrong with having some short funnies like these. Hope to see the next one soon.

~ Review Request Club ~

Dugh responds:

Thanks :D

[ADITLOY 2 - Newcomer]

Needs a lot of work to be good.

Animation/Graphics - First off the animation itself needs to be worked on. Things like the walking could be worked on greatly. That's really the biggest thing in terms of animation. The drawing also needs to be done a lot better. If the drawing was worked on this flash would seem like much better quality. The background, the characters, and generally most of the things that were drawn in this flash need to be worked on to an extent.

Story/Content - Another great concept. You do have a lot of good ideas when it comes to flashes. Weren't you going to include me in one of these man? I could have done voices and everything for it. Even though my mic doesn't work on my computer anymore. The story wasn't too bad. Kind of a nice flash to sit back and relax when you are watching.

Audio - This really needs a lot of work. Was that your voice that I heard? Anyway, sometimes the voice was really loud and sometimes the voice was really quiet. Sometimes the quality of the voices were alright and somtimes the quality of the voices sounded like shit. When there is static it just means the person has to back off of the mic and talk loud and clear. The voices need a lot of work.

Overall - If the drawing, animation, and voices were better in this flash I wouldn't doubt that it would get some sort of award whether it be a daily award or one of the RCP or underdog awards.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[[L7C]QuestForLevel60-Day5]

Slow claps.

That was beautiful.

Animation/Graphics - Pretty smooth work all around with these sprites. I enjoy watching sprite animations because they always bring back good memories of playing games like Mario or Sonic. The only animation that I think you need to work on is the jumping animation. He just kind of floated there too long and he jumps way too far when he did. I think it was just a little bit of lazy animation there. =P Also, sometimes he would still be running while he jumped. That's also something that should have been fixed and seemed just a little lazy.

Story/Content - I remember seeing this flash when you submitted it I think. I really love the concept of this flash and think you should continue it. It's a really good idea, especially when you put effort into it like this. With each level the flash should be a little bit longer and a little bit harder for Mario to be successful in.

Audio - The pokemon music really made me laugh here. ^^ The audio and sound effects were perfectly fine and well synced. Good job all around.

Overall - Probably would be one of my favorite series if you continued them successfully like this one.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[The Pie Collab!]

Fucking awesome.

This is by far one of your best submissions that I have ever seen.

Animation/Graphics - The animation and the graphics were alright for the most part. Chaz-o's drawings and animation was very smooth and well done as Yoshi's parts weren't the best done, but still kind of neat in their own style. Probably the smoothness animation from any of your flashes though.

Story/Content - Ha, a pretty good idea for a collab like this. I enjoyed it. I think that you could have had a couple more scenes, but for the most part the length of the submission was pretty good. I also loved the one by Chaz-o, which resulted in heavy metal music and the don't trust random pies thing. I liked the joke that Yoshi made about Pi. That was a good one.

Audio - Pretty good sound effects and music. Nothing really to complain about here really. Perhaps you could have used some voices, but that's really the only thing to fix with the audio part.

Overall - A great collab. Why don't you make more of these?

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[Music Video Collab 2]

Nice job guys.

Animation/Graphics - This was a very good job at animating on almost every single part. Maybe not every single one, but almost. You had a lot of talented flash artists in this collab and it really helped the collab flourish. I liked the way the menu was set up on the Ipod. There was a little glitch at the end where some name popped up towards the end, but it wasn't up there long enough to see what it said.

Story/Content - It's a great idea for a collab. Things ran pretty smoothly together and everyone had a pretty good concept to go with the song. Again, not every concept was the best, but for the most part it was pretty good. I sadly couldn't find any easter egss. I'm terrible at that kind of thing. :(

Audio - This had a great selection of songs, which all went well with the animation, but there was a small problem. Two of the songs, if I'm remembering correctly, were very low in volume. To the point where I had to turn my volume way up just to hear them and when the next part came on the music was super load as a result of me turning the volume up. I recommend making the songs louder on these sections so people don't have to go through this.

Overall - A very good job with just a couple of simple mistakes.

~ Review Request Club ~

Assios responds:

Whoa, thank you! Good and detailed review! :D

[The Unfinished Collab]

Something about this..

Something about this just seemed.. unfinished. I can't put my finger on it. ;)

Animation/Graphics - For the most part I think a lot of the contributers of this collab need to work on their drawing and/or animating skills just a little bit. Most were rough and/or not animated very smoothly or drawn very smoothly. That's not speaking for all of them though. I did enjoy some of them and though some of them were very well animated and drawn. The best in my opinion is probably the Blackman one. =P

Story/Content - A good idea for a collab. If I would have known about it then I could have probably added something too. =P I don't have time for collabs really though. Again, some were boring, but for the most part there were a lot of interesting/funny/even racist parts in their. =) I like the menu where you had the numbers keep going without anything there. Very smart.

Audio - I understand that this is suppose to be unfinished and everything, but I think the ones that didn't include sounds on their pieces should have included something because theirs were just a bit more boring than the others. I also think there should have been some sort of background music on the menu and in between scenes.

Overall - A good idea and a good presentation. Only a couple of things here and there that I didn't really like about it, but generally it was a good collab.

~ Review Request Club ~

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review!

In response to the lack of audio in the menu, I did try to put it in, but it completely messed up...

[Rubiks Cube]

Nice style here.

Animation/Graphics - You have a really nice style of animation here. The animation was pretty smooth and fun to watch. The drawings were also done very well and in your own special style, which usually makes the graphics original and better to watch. Good job all around here. I liked your animated replay button also. =P

Story/Content - Woah, is that a movie? Ha, so Chester it was your birthday and someone sent you a rubiks cube and a happy birthday note or something? Or is it just suppose to be random and not made for any specific reason? Either way, I usually enjoy watching birthday flashes. =P

Audio - I thought the audio could have been a tad louder. It could be just my speakers, my bad ears, or maybe the music really was quiet, but I had to turn my volume all the way up to get a good listen to it. Not bad though and a nice selection of background music.

Overall - Not too bad. Maybe the storyline could have been worked on a little bit in your author comments or something so we kind of knew what the flash was about and perhaps you could have had the person play with the rubiks cube and when he figured it out the note appeared or something.

~ Review Request Club ~

ChillyCheese responds:

Thanks, for the music thing, it actually is fairly loud on my computer.

I cant really think of what to respond for all of this, but don't think that I dont listen to what you're saying, I just cant really show any appreciation beside giving a..

-Thanks.

[Ghost Motel 9 (3D)]

A stretch..

That I think you shouldn't have taken with this series. Or at last did a little bit better job if you did..

Animation/Graphics - The 3D style is different, but I liked the style that you were going with already on the series. What program did you use to make this though? It was quite interesting and I haven't seen too many 3D submissions like this before. Anyway, the animation was sort of choppy and wasn't always smooth. Even if I turned the quality down it was still a bit choppy here and there.

Story/Content - Ouch.. this is were the series was really hurt. Barely any story to it at all and barely and content at all. All he did was shoot one Demon and then moved on to shoot some more, but never did. Extremely short and is a very big downgrade from your other flash submissions in this series.

Audio - A nice selection of music in the background and good voices/sound effects. Thats about it with the audio. Perhaps a little more sound effects from the demons would have been appropriate and maybe something like the screams of nearby ghosts would have worked pretty good.

Overall - In my opinion the runt of the bunch. Not too good at all. I hope the future episodes aren't this short/empty. :(

Violet-AIM responds:

This was more of a new style on this not that we were not going back to the old style it was just a test at a game.