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[ADITLOY 2 - Newcomer]

Needs a lot of work to be good.

Animation/Graphics - First off the animation itself needs to be worked on. Things like the walking could be worked on greatly. That's really the biggest thing in terms of animation. The drawing also needs to be done a lot better. If the drawing was worked on this flash would seem like much better quality. The background, the characters, and generally most of the things that were drawn in this flash need to be worked on to an extent.

Story/Content - Another great concept. You do have a lot of good ideas when it comes to flashes. Weren't you going to include me in one of these man? I could have done voices and everything for it. Even though my mic doesn't work on my computer anymore. The story wasn't too bad. Kind of a nice flash to sit back and relax when you are watching.

Audio - This really needs a lot of work. Was that your voice that I heard? Anyway, sometimes the voice was really loud and sometimes the voice was really quiet. Sometimes the quality of the voices were alright and somtimes the quality of the voices sounded like shit. When there is static it just means the person has to back off of the mic and talk loud and clear. The voices need a lot of work.

Overall - If the drawing, animation, and voices were better in this flash I wouldn't doubt that it would get some sort of award whether it be a daily award or one of the RCP or underdog awards.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[[L7C]QuestForLevel60-Day5]

Slow claps.

That was beautiful.

Animation/Graphics - Pretty smooth work all around with these sprites. I enjoy watching sprite animations because they always bring back good memories of playing games like Mario or Sonic. The only animation that I think you need to work on is the jumping animation. He just kind of floated there too long and he jumps way too far when he did. I think it was just a little bit of lazy animation there. =P Also, sometimes he would still be running while he jumped. That's also something that should have been fixed and seemed just a little lazy.

Story/Content - I remember seeing this flash when you submitted it I think. I really love the concept of this flash and think you should continue it. It's a really good idea, especially when you put effort into it like this. With each level the flash should be a little bit longer and a little bit harder for Mario to be successful in.

Audio - The pokemon music really made me laugh here. ^^ The audio and sound effects were perfectly fine and well synced. Good job all around.

Overall - Probably would be one of my favorite series if you continued them successfully like this one.

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[The Pie Collab!]

Fucking awesome.

This is by far one of your best submissions that I have ever seen.

Animation/Graphics - The animation and the graphics were alright for the most part. Chaz-o's drawings and animation was very smooth and well done as Yoshi's parts weren't the best done, but still kind of neat in their own style. Probably the smoothness animation from any of your flashes though.

Story/Content - Ha, a pretty good idea for a collab like this. I enjoyed it. I think that you could have had a couple more scenes, but for the most part the length of the submission was pretty good. I also loved the one by Chaz-o, which resulted in heavy metal music and the don't trust random pies thing. I liked the joke that Yoshi made about Pi. That was a good one.

Audio - Pretty good sound effects and music. Nothing really to complain about here really. Perhaps you could have used some voices, but that's really the only thing to fix with the audio part.

Overall - A great collab. Why don't you make more of these?

Sispri responds:

Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.

For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.

I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.

[The Unfinished Collab]

Something about this..

Something about this just seemed.. unfinished. I can't put my finger on it. ;)

Animation/Graphics - For the most part I think a lot of the contributers of this collab need to work on their drawing and/or animating skills just a little bit. Most were rough and/or not animated very smoothly or drawn very smoothly. That's not speaking for all of them though. I did enjoy some of them and though some of them were very well animated and drawn. The best in my opinion is probably the Blackman one. =P

Story/Content - A good idea for a collab. If I would have known about it then I could have probably added something too. =P I don't have time for collabs really though. Again, some were boring, but for the most part there were a lot of interesting/funny/even racist parts in their. =) I like the menu where you had the numbers keep going without anything there. Very smart.

Audio - I understand that this is suppose to be unfinished and everything, but I think the ones that didn't include sounds on their pieces should have included something because theirs were just a bit more boring than the others. I also think there should have been some sort of background music on the menu and in between scenes.

Overall - A good idea and a good presentation. Only a couple of things here and there that I didn't really like about it, but generally it was a good collab.

~ Review Request Club ~

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review!

In response to the lack of audio in the menu, I did try to put it in, but it completely messed up...

[Rubiks Cube]

Nice style here.

Animation/Graphics - You have a really nice style of animation here. The animation was pretty smooth and fun to watch. The drawings were also done very well and in your own special style, which usually makes the graphics original and better to watch. Good job all around here. I liked your animated replay button also. =P

Story/Content - Woah, is that a movie? Ha, so Chester it was your birthday and someone sent you a rubiks cube and a happy birthday note or something? Or is it just suppose to be random and not made for any specific reason? Either way, I usually enjoy watching birthday flashes. =P

Audio - I thought the audio could have been a tad louder. It could be just my speakers, my bad ears, or maybe the music really was quiet, but I had to turn my volume all the way up to get a good listen to it. Not bad though and a nice selection of background music.

Overall - Not too bad. Maybe the storyline could have been worked on a little bit in your author comments or something so we kind of knew what the flash was about and perhaps you could have had the person play with the rubiks cube and when he figured it out the note appeared or something.

~ Review Request Club ~

ChillyCheese responds:

Thanks, for the music thing, it actually is fairly loud on my computer.

I cant really think of what to respond for all of this, but don't think that I dont listen to what you're saying, I just cant really show any appreciation beside giving a..

-Thanks.

[Ghost Motel 4 Outtakes]

Lmao

Animation/Graphics - Good like always. Everything was just a tad bit better in this one and you had a lot of actual animation.

Story/Content - I fucking loved this. It was probably one of the funniest episodes that I have watched in a long time. Just the way that you guys bashed that reviewer for leaving a dumb review. Haha, it makes me want to make a flash just to bash on the reviewers from my flashes. That's awesome. Just the concept of it is amazing. There were a lot of things to choose from on this flash and a lot of the stuff was funny. Some of it wasn't so funny, but it looked like you were trying too hard to make some of the things funny, but the things that were funny outnumbered the things that weren't.

Audio - Voice acting was alright again. I can see that you are getting a little better with the voices on the ghosts, but the Riddler's voice wasn't very good for some parts. Some parts sounded like they had a lot of static when he talked. Something that can be worked on a little bit by backing away from the mic and talking loud/clear.

Overall - One of my favorites in this series and I think it's funny enough to make my favorites list. Good job all around here.

Violet-AIM responds:

Thank you, we had fun making this one.