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[**DEMO**trance**DEMO**]

Woah..

How in the world am I suppose to leave a review with that monster of a review after mine?

For a demo I personally thought it was rather good. What exactly is going to be done with the final version? I know I would recommend making it longer, which I think you are going to end up doing.

I think it has a nice catchy beat to it. Pretty fun to listen to even though it is quite a short demo. Nothing too repetitive or anything as it isn't very long. An overall good demo in my opinion.

Oh boy.. deleting it? :( I dislike it very much when my review numbers go down, but do whatever you have to do.

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Assios responds:

Thank you very much ;D And no, I won't delete it after all. I wouldn't ask for reviews in the review request club if I was going to delete it. I'll just update the song when I've made the final version of the song, and the reviews and score will stay :)

[sur ur ur ur ender]

Hmm...

I think the song itself would be much better without the sur ur ur ur ender part that you had in there. Of course without it then it still wouldn't sound very good at all. So the overall sound of the song was just downright terrible, but the little smile that I get from listening to the song deserves a couple of points.

I think the best way to improve this one to improve the voice that says sur ur ur ur ender. I think it should be more of a deeper voice or even a computerized/robotic voice wouldn't sound too bad here. I also think the surrender should have just been said as surrender. It probably would of helped a lot if you would have included some more lyrics than just that one word too.

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mikkim responds:

YOU BETTER sur ur ur ur ender to listening to lyrics more closely.

[Song of Storms (My version)]

Not too bad.

Sounds good enough to be used in a flash game. It worked pretty good with the game that you made and you used it in. I liked the variety that you used in the song. You first started off normal, really slowed the submission down, and then really picked up the pace again.

Could be cleaned up a little bit though. I think it would sound a little bit better as a loop so I wouldn't mind seeing you getting it to loop well.

fallensoul289 responds:

thanks for the review yes it could be cleaned up a bit

[Waking the Beast]

You bastard

Don't delete your audio. ^^ I hate it when my review count goes down that much. Ha, I do remember this piece of audio and I probably mentioned something in my last review with how you should add some kick ass vocals in it, but fuck me I say that in everyone of your songs that don't already have vocals.

How did I miss reviewing this one? I just reviewed your stuff a couple of days ago I thought. Oh well, I guess it happens. I'm happy I checked in so I didn't miss it. Just a tad bit repetitive, but it still kick ass. *Another vocals comment* You know vocals help stop making a song so repetitive right? Haha, I'm just picking on you though. I know real life has you busy and everything.

Great guitar and great drums all around. Great piece of audio that everyone should have a listen to sometime.

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

haha. Thanks very much man. Sorry about the deleting stuff. Won't happen again.
Anyways, Thanks for the review, dude. Glad to see you out and about again.

Yeah, song would be less repetitive with vocals, As soon as I get the time, I will. :D

Thanks again, man

[Revolutionary Physics]

Pretty good.

I can barely tell that it loops. The only reason that I could tell it was going to loop at all was because of the little fade out effect where you made things more quiet towards the end of the song so it would fit the beginning of the submission a little better.

You did something that people that make loops for video games have a hard time doing. You made it long enough without it being too long and you added enough variety throughout the song so that it's not that repetitive of a loop. For some reason people don't understand what I mean by a loop not being repetitive and this is exactly what I mean. You added enough variety throughout the entire song so by the time it gets back to the beginning it doesn't really sound like it's the same old same old all over again because we kind of forget exactly how it sounds.

Good job all around and it will probably be used for a flash submission, especially a game. Or at least it would be useful for that.

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SFaPiL2 responds:

I'm glad that it's not repetitive. I was worried that there was TOO much variety, making the listener distracted.

Thanks alot. I hope it'll be useful to someone.

[Day of Trance (Day 1)]

Not too bad, but not the best.

The impression that I got from this submission was that you were just practicing with a new program and having fun making a new submission. I can tell that because it's really generic meaning it sounds like most other submissions of this genre.

The build up effect wasn't too bad. It seems like almost everyone uses the build up effect in their songs anymore. It's still something that should be used in a lot of songs though in my opinion.

The overall sound of the submission was very repetitive. Working on some sound effects or different things to add variety would probably really help the submission out.

The sound that you introduced somewhere around 17 or 18 seconds into the song was very interesting though. I really liked the sound and it gave it almost a dreamy feel. Something that seems to me doesn't really fit the rest of the song too well, but should definitely be put in a different song sometime if you can get it to work.

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jxl180 responds:

Thanks for the review, yeah, I was mostly just seeing what this version had to offer and just threw this together.

[Mega Man ZXA | Soul Ablaze]

Long as shit

Really long, but because of that the submission is just a tad bit repetitive. It still has a very catchy tune to it and it was fast paced and quick. It would make some epic theme song to a Mega Man movie or probably several other movies too.

I've never saw, heard, or played anything that had to do with Mega Man before in my life so I can't really relate this song to the original, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that you did a great job on it.

So good job to both of you on a great quality song.

[Rage of the DarKness]

I loved it

The only way to explain the sound that this audio makes would be epicness. It sounds like an epic battle song and heavy metal guitar mixed together. Even though every epic battle song needs guitar like this in my opinion.. wait no that's a fact.

I never played the game so I can't really put in the real visuals while listening to this, but you sure created some good ones. Also, what's the boss in the game?

[Travelling the past RAW]

Welcome to the Dark Side

Nice introduction to this song. What I really enjoyed was the part right around 52 seconds where it picked up a got a little bit heavier. It does seem like it needs a little bit more added to it. Perhaps a couple of screaming vocals and a little bit longer submission with a kick ass solo would finish this song off properly.

An overall good song though.

[When you're gone]

Nice job

When I was listening to this song I imagined a scene in a flash submission of a character/hero walking away from a big battle that he just won with pride, glory, etc.. I'll probably end up using it in a flash in the near future for exactly a scene like that.

Nice guitar that's pretty soothing in this song. A littler short, but nothing wrong with it. It's packed full of quality. ^^

Good job all around.