~ Review Request Club ~
I'm surprised why this hasn't won a better award or been front paged. Perhaps it's one of those things that didn't quite get noticed by Tom. Oh well, it happens like that I guess. I think it's rather amazing if I may say so myself.
Before I get into reviewing the submission I have a quick question. Why didn't you fit it to the screen correctly? There was a thin layer of gray that almost made this look like it was from something and you just took it and submitted it as your own. I'm sure this isn't true, but it was almost like you didn't know the dimensions of your movie.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
There were a few parts where they didn't seem to quite fit the style that you were using. While watching this I could tell the cat was done in one thing, the background was done in another, etc... I think that without this meshing of the styles into one blended mix it'll never really get to that next step.
I already mentioned that it was quite good so the next step that I'm referring to is making real cartoons that you would see on television. I really don't think that would be too much of a jump to say I could see you doing this for a career.
~ Story/Concept ~
This is why it probably didn't win a better award. I know most people on the site have the attention span of a 5 year old and can't watch anything that has a story/plot to it without a lot of action.
I wouldn't have minded seeing a bit more action in it as well, but it had a nice concept and story all around and it was a nice relief from the killing, cock jokes, and immature submissions that are usually the most popular.
~ Audio ~
I wouldn't have minded hearing voices. I know that the animals don't have voices, but the characters at the end could have. The sound effects and music were very fitting and I found that they really added to the submission. Never once did they seem out of place.
~ Overall ~
The animation was really good, but I feel like you could have mixed them and blended them to seem as one a bit better. The story could have used a little more excitement or emotion, but was generally a good idea. The audio was very fitting with the submission.
I feel this deserves more than a 5th place and that it could have at least been front paged.
~ Review Request Club ~