Not bad.
The song was too simplistic. Pretty much the melody was too simple in my opinion. The distortion that is in the song really doesn't fit the song very good. I feel that you had a good selections of instruments and the song overall had a good beet to it. Overall it was kind of simple, (Like this review lul) but it was still a good piece of audio. Good job.
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Thanks.
I liked it.
It kind of had a sad tone to it. It then picked up a little bit further throughout the song and I started to get into it. I let it play a couple of times through in the background while I was doing other things. I can't really think of anything to make it better except for at the ending of the song it kind of ended all of a sudden, but maybe that's not a bad thing in the case of this song because it sounded pretty decent.
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Thanks. Yeah, the ending's always seem to come up.
Pretty good.
This is really the kind of song that I would think to see in a RPG game, but it might need a couple of adjustments to be used in one, but it's pretty close. You may want to think about making some songs that could be used in games. The song was pretty interesting in itself. It isn't really your everyday song to be honest. That made it fun to listen to and I do have to admit that it was pretty catchy. Overall a pretty good job.
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Thanks again for the review. I might start thinking about making songs aimed at being in games.
Really good.
It never got repitive due to the great amount of variety that you had throughout the song. You got me interested in the song right from the very beginning and I can see that there was a lot of effort that was put into this just like you said in your author comments. I did have one thing that I really didn't like about the song, but it wasn't enough to drop your score on the rating at all in my opinion. I thought the song should of ended as the last couple of notes faded out and I thought that was the perfect ending, but you added that last little sound at the very end of the song, which in my opinion didn't really fit there. I liked the fading out ending much better.
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Not bad.
It was alright. It would probably go well with any game type flash. I do think that the (sorry I'm not good with instruments), but the crash cymbal, if that's what it is, might of been just a bit out of place in this audio submission. Not enough to hurt the submission too much in my opinion, but I just felt like it didn't go together smoothly with the rest of the song.
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Very nice.
The introduction of the song got me interested right away, which is always a good thing when listening to audio. You had a lot of variety and a very good pace to the song. You even slowed down in some parts and then made it quicken back up again. The only thing about this song that I was hoping for was just one of those really fast, energetic spots. I guess something like a solo or just that place that was really hardcore in a song, if that makes sense at all. >.< Still a very good job though.
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heyy i never thought of that but now that you mention I wonder why the hell I didnt add it... woudlve been so perfect.
Thanks, defenitely something I'll remember next time I make a song.
-M
Pretty messy.
The submission started out alright, but it got messy somewhere around the middle of the submission. I do admit that using the game system noises as instruments is original, but the constant noise of the coins was very annoying in my opinion. And the other ringing noise was sort of annoying also. Perhaps add some structure to the song and tone down those noises a bit. Also, towards the end of there really wasn't an ending to the submission. It just sort of stopped in the middle of a series of notes, but it might be ok as a loop instead.
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Hmm.
Nothing too great really, but it wasn't really bad. I guess the biggest problem that I had with it was that it really had no structure whatsoever. It just sounded like a bunch of stuff thrown together all at once and was pretty messy in my opinion. The explosion sounds at the end were kind of cool, but I think you should of ended the song as the last one faded out.
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Thank you for your review,
jxl180
Pretty cool.
This is a pretty cool submission. I wouldn't mind hearing what the song sounded like before you revised it because I'm sure it was a great improvement. This was a powerful submission just as you said in your author comments. I could see it being used in an action filled flash animation or perhaps a scene in a flash game of some sort. It's a fun submission to listen to. Good job.
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thanks for the sweet review man. im just friggin psyched that i finally made the top 30
Nice job.
I do have to admit that the same repetitive noise over and over got annoying after awhile. I don't think that it's so much of hearing it so many times in a row, because it did fit nicely with the song, but I think it was because it was the same exact thing for the entirety of the song. Perhaps if you changed it up somewhere in the middle of the song that it would of made it a little bit more interesting to listen to and not so boring ot the listeners.
C52
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Thanks for the review! I love the RRC!
As for the repetitiveness, I did think that was going to end up being a little too much, but this was in essence my first attempt, so expect a little more variety on the timbre of the piece next time
Thanks again
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