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[.:HMS:. Pursuing Decorum MAC8]

Very nice.

The introduction of the song got me interested right away, which is always a good thing when listening to audio. You had a lot of variety and a very good pace to the song. You even slowed down in some parts and then made it quicken back up again. The only thing about this song that I was hoping for was just one of those really fast, energetic spots. I guess something like a solo or just that place that was really hardcore in a song, if that makes sense at all. >.< Still a very good job though.

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HMS-Productions responds:

heyy i never thought of that but now that you mention I wonder why the hell I didnt add it... woudlve been so perfect.

Thanks, defenitely something I'll remember next time I make a song.

-M

[supa NES]

Pretty messy.

The submission started out alright, but it got messy somewhere around the middle of the submission. I do admit that using the game system noises as instruments is original, but the constant noise of the coins was very annoying in my opinion. And the other ringing noise was sort of annoying also. Perhaps add some structure to the song and tone down those noises a bit. Also, towards the end of there really wasn't an ending to the submission. It just sort of stopped in the middle of a series of notes, but it might be ok as a loop instead.

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[Tomorrow Never Comes]

Hmm.

Nothing too great really, but it wasn't really bad. I guess the biggest problem that I had with it was that it really had no structure whatsoever. It just sounded like a bunch of stuff thrown together all at once and was pretty messy in my opinion. The explosion sounds at the end were kind of cool, but I think you should of ended the song as the last one faded out.

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jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review,
jxl180

[But Who Will Save The City]

Pretty cool.

This is a pretty cool submission. I wouldn't mind hearing what the song sounded like before you revised it because I'm sure it was a great improvement. This was a powerful submission just as you said in your author comments. I could see it being used in an action filled flash animation or perhaps a scene in a flash game of some sort. It's a fun submission to listen to. Good job.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

thanks for the sweet review man. im just friggin psyched that i finally made the top 30

[Colossus.Ambiance]

Nice job.

I do have to admit that the same repetitive noise over and over got annoying after awhile. I don't think that it's so much of hearing it so many times in a row, because it did fit nicely with the song, but I think it was because it was the same exact thing for the entirety of the song. Perhaps if you changed it up somewhere in the middle of the song that it would of made it a little bit more interesting to listen to and not so boring ot the listeners.

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Flash-MX responds:

Thanks for the review! I love the RRC!
As for the repetitiveness, I did think that was going to end up being a little too much, but this was in essence my first attempt, so expect a little more variety on the timbre of the piece next time

Thanks again

[Boring Instrumental]

Nice man.

I don't think it was too boring, but hey your opinion is your own opinion for a reason. I liked the entire thing actually, but I would have to agree with you on one fact. That this song would of been so much better if you would have included lyrics to it. I think you should think about including them some time and maybe resubmitting them. That's really up to you though. Overall, a pretty good song that probably would be even better with the addition of lyrics.

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BreakingFaces responds:

Thank you very much for your input.

[Invasion 2.0 - Mjattie (NG)]

Really good.

I thought this song would be a beautiful piece for any type of flash game or maybe even some movies. I noticed an earlier review mentioned a game like Age of Empires and that's pretty much exactly the type of game that I was thinking about when I started to listen to this song. I can't really critique you on this song at all as I really didn't find anything wrong with it so my review is just full of praise instead. Good job. :)

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mjattie responds:

thankss::0

[It's Finally Coming]

Lets see here.

I think in the beginning it was alright, but it was kind of plain and repetitive. It seemed like something was going to happen or change, but it just never happened really. Then it slowed down, which was different and it did sound kind of weird. After it was done slowing down it just sounded like a whole bunch of things thrown together and it made the submission sound a bit messy. Overall, the whole submission just seemed weird and out of place.

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MusicIsBliss responds:

ya, good point, need to work more on song structuring, it didnt even occur to me

[Simply Childhood ( teaser )]

Not bad.

It was alright, but I just don't think everything really fit in the song. It was awkward to listen to at times, but I guess it does kind of go along with it in a sense since the song was a bit mysterious. It would be a pretty decent song for some flash movie that needed an ambient song though. I think this may go a bit better with a movie then it would go with a game, but that's my opinion.

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[§-Love at First Site-§]

Pretty good.

Oh no please don't kill the kitty. :( Oh wait, I really don't care since I'm allergic to cats and my nose is bothering the shit out of me right about now. >:(

Just like you said in your author comments the song was a bit repetitive at times, but not too bad to really hurt the submission as a whole. What a nice description you had to the song in your author comments also. Looks like maybe someone has found true love here? ;) I don't know if the ending of the song really fit with the rest of the song because it kind of makes me think that it's finally ending and the rest of the song makes it seem like it's going to last forever. The it that I'm talking about is the feeling that they are having towards each other obviously. So overall a pretty good submission.

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SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Well the ending i was going towards was more of a happy life finally acheived... The 2 lived it out through there lifes... The ending sound is the sound of the love disapeering... Moving on to another couple to finally move the chain along just as in life when one dies they no longer walk the earth... but surely there has to be someone in the world out there exactly like them in spirit and beliefs... Moving on to that person untill he completes his journey as the one before him had.

~§in§