Hmm.
Nothing too great really, but it wasn't really bad. I guess the biggest problem that I had with it was that it really had no structure whatsoever. It just sounded like a bunch of stuff thrown together all at once and was pretty messy in my opinion. The explosion sounds at the end were kind of cool, but I think you should of ended the song as the last one faded out.
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Thank you for your review,
jxl180
Pretty cool.
This is a pretty cool submission. I wouldn't mind hearing what the song sounded like before you revised it because I'm sure it was a great improvement. This was a powerful submission just as you said in your author comments. I could see it being used in an action filled flash animation or perhaps a scene in a flash game of some sort. It's a fun submission to listen to. Good job.
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thanks for the sweet review man. im just friggin psyched that i finally made the top 30
Nice job.
I do have to admit that the same repetitive noise over and over got annoying after awhile. I don't think that it's so much of hearing it so many times in a row, because it did fit nicely with the song, but I think it was because it was the same exact thing for the entirety of the song. Perhaps if you changed it up somewhere in the middle of the song that it would of made it a little bit more interesting to listen to and not so boring ot the listeners.
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Thanks for the review! I love the RRC!
As for the repetitiveness, I did think that was going to end up being a little too much, but this was in essence my first attempt, so expect a little more variety on the timbre of the piece next time
Thanks again
Nice man.
I don't think it was too boring, but hey your opinion is your own opinion for a reason. I liked the entire thing actually, but I would have to agree with you on one fact. That this song would of been so much better if you would have included lyrics to it. I think you should think about including them some time and maybe resubmitting them. That's really up to you though. Overall, a pretty good song that probably would be even better with the addition of lyrics.
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Thank you very much for your input.
Really good.
I thought this song would be a beautiful piece for any type of flash game or maybe even some movies. I noticed an earlier review mentioned a game like Age of Empires and that's pretty much exactly the type of game that I was thinking about when I started to listen to this song. I can't really critique you on this song at all as I really didn't find anything wrong with it so my review is just full of praise instead. Good job. :)
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Lets see here.
I think in the beginning it was alright, but it was kind of plain and repetitive. It seemed like something was going to happen or change, but it just never happened really. Then it slowed down, which was different and it did sound kind of weird. After it was done slowing down it just sounded like a whole bunch of things thrown together and it made the submission sound a bit messy. Overall, the whole submission just seemed weird and out of place.
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ya, good point, need to work more on song structuring, it didnt even occur to me
Not bad.
It was alright, but I just don't think everything really fit in the song. It was awkward to listen to at times, but I guess it does kind of go along with it in a sense since the song was a bit mysterious. It would be a pretty decent song for some flash movie that needed an ambient song though. I think this may go a bit better with a movie then it would go with a game, but that's my opinion.
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Pretty good.
Oh no please don't kill the kitty. :( Oh wait, I really don't care since I'm allergic to cats and my nose is bothering the shit out of me right about now. >:(
Just like you said in your author comments the song was a bit repetitive at times, but not too bad to really hurt the submission as a whole. What a nice description you had to the song in your author comments also. Looks like maybe someone has found true love here? ;) I don't know if the ending of the song really fit with the rest of the song because it kind of makes me think that it's finally ending and the rest of the song makes it seem like it's going to last forever. The it that I'm talking about is the feeling that they are having towards each other obviously. So overall a pretty good submission.
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Well the ending i was going towards was more of a happy life finally acheived... The 2 lived it out through there lifes... The ending sound is the sound of the love disapeering... Moving on to another couple to finally move the chain along just as in life when one dies they no longer walk the earth... but surely there has to be someone in the world out there exactly like them in spirit and beliefs... Moving on to that person untill he completes his journey as the one before him had.
~§in§
Good job.
I thought that the author comments you had to describe the song were very interesting as it's probably not what I would have thought of while listening to this song, but the further it got into the song the more I guess I could see imagining the situation. The song was pretty good and it had a pretty cheerful mood to it, which was the original reason why I was confused why this would be about someone in the need of being saved, but then I thought about what the music may sound like if the person had been given a helping hand and what their mood would then be like. I didn't mind the abrupt ending at the end of the song. It could of had a bit of work, but it didn't hurt the submission too much. Maybe you could of used a fade out or something like a sequence that just sounded good towards the end of the song, which ended on a final note.
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Thanks for the review... And yes you have to listen to it and read what i said to understand fully... Im not starting the chain here in this song but merely passing it along to another person. So instead of making it sound like a fairly gloomy song that goes toward the happier side of life i decided to make it where someone has already been helped and is now helping another person and even though he cant be helped anymore he is still having his fun helping other people move toward there goals!!
~§in§
Pretty good man.
I loved the way it started out with the piano, but I do think the guitar needed to be just a bit louder. The guitar does give the song kind of a dark feeling though, which makes the song interesting because it's not what I would of saw the song being when I first started listening to it. Lyrics might be pretty cool on the song. I don't think they are needed, but they wouldn't hurt either. So if you do put some lyrics on them make sure to check back in with the Review Request Club so we can check it out.
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yay will do
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