Good job.
I thought that the author comments you had to describe the song were very interesting as it's probably not what I would have thought of while listening to this song, but the further it got into the song the more I guess I could see imagining the situation. The song was pretty good and it had a pretty cheerful mood to it, which was the original reason why I was confused why this would be about someone in the need of being saved, but then I thought about what the music may sound like if the person had been given a helping hand and what their mood would then be like. I didn't mind the abrupt ending at the end of the song. It could of had a bit of work, but it didn't hurt the submission too much. Maybe you could of used a fade out or something like a sequence that just sounded good towards the end of the song, which ended on a final note.
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