Um, here have I heard this before ;)
OHHH yeah, this use to be Corky52's Theme Song. :) I think you should give a little credit to me and mention the title of SonOfKirks song in there. I really like the addition of lyrics to my theme song. You really hit it in my opinion. I have to say by far my favorite part of your vocals was when it started with, "Bring me your fears and..." The vocals were amazing in that part of the song. I was hoping he added another solo towards the end of the song because it just seems to go on for a bit too long. Maybe some sort of vocals could of went there too just to make it seem not so empty. That could be fixed in several ways though. More vocals, shorter song, additional solo, or just make the origninal solo longer itself. But I have to say that I did enjoy listening to this very much. If I ever need to use a heavy metal song for anything this will be the first thing that I look to use. Great job.
Side note - I recommended this to the review request club and in your author comments you just have a small typo. The first time you say, "Sleep in my tomb" and the second time you exchange my for your even though in the song it still says my. A small error, nothing too big.
C52
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