Hmm, I could probably just..
I could probably just copy and paste my last review for your other song. I think that you need to make it into a song instead of the very short segment that you had. It sounds really off for some reason like there are errors in it. I'm not sure if they are errors or if you did that on purpose to give it an interesting sound. Either way it does sound a lot different.
Overall - Way too short to really give it a proper review in my opinion.
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