Fro's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Franswa - God's Love Remix]

Pretty good.

I honestly had a hard time getting through this a couple of times because I kind of got bored (not to be rude), but I think it was because the submission was really relaxing, which isn't really my kind of music. I can't be opinionated on the review though so the quality of the submission was great. It even put my girlfriend back to sleep when I first listened to it this morning. She really liked it because it was so relaxing so it must have been pretty good.

Overall - Maybe a little repetitive, but a very relaxing song to listen to. Especially if it can put some one to sleep like that.

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EternalXIII responds:

Thanks much for the review!!! The repetitiveness is something I'm deffinately trying to overcome!

[MH16: Rage!]

Not bad.

I think what would have made this submission sound so much better is some heavier guitar towards the end of the song. Right around 1:28 (after the song slows done, which I would like to add sounded perfect where you had it) I think you should have went into a much faster heavier sound with the guitar. Something like a solo would have worked perfectly there.

You had a lot of variety in the song though and it was a fun fast paced song to listen to. Really good job all around.

Overall - Perhaps needed to be a little bit heavier so it could related to the rage that you were talking about in your author comments.

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FairSquare responds:

That's very helpful advice and i might change that in the future.
Thanks!

MH16

[MH16: Light & Loose]

Pretty good.

I enjoyed the song for the most part. I thought it built up rather nice, but there might have been a couple of places where it was kind of messy. Maybe not though because it didn't sound too bad. Other than it sounding a little cluttered in a few spots I still think you managed to get the sound to work for you. I think the ending was done very well.

Overall - A decent song that may be cluttered a little bit, but the overall quality is good.

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FairSquare responds:

Thanks!

[Marche Hasardeuse]

Not bad.

First off congrats on your first audio submission. I do think that it was very well done for what you had here. I liked how it started off with the intro and then built up a little bit to the end. I do think that perhaps you could have ended it a bit better, but the rest of the song was pretty good. Perhaps you should start working on the length of your submission now and try too keep the same good quality that this one had.

Overall - Not a bad piece, but it would probably be much better if it was longer. What you had was pretty good though.

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[Franswa - Norhternlights]

Pretty good.

The first thing I would like to say is this song gets pretty repetitive right off the back in my opinion, but for some reason it's still a song that I could listen to for quite a long time without getting bored with it or sick of the sound. You had a great selection of sound in this song and it was a great relaxing submission to listen to. Perhaps some simple vocals could make this submission so it wasn't so repetitive, but I don't really know if vocals would take away from the submission a little or not.

Overall - A great submission that seems to be repetitive, but doesn't really get boring or old at all.

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[Franswa - Teaser two demo]

Not bad for a demo.

It's just a demo so I'm assuming that explains the reason why it's so short in length? Either way it's a pretty good song you have here. While very short you have a high quality production. Pretty good beat and a fun submission to listen to.

Pretty original sound to it in my opinion and (even though it's short so it's easy to avoid) it's not really too repetitive or boring. So the only thing I can say is to increase the length of the submission a little bit without actually making it repetitive or anything like that.

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[Waiting in the Terminal]

Weird

This had a different sound to it. It was pretty interesting all around with some original sounds and noises. That being said it did sound pretty weird, but at the same time different which means original and original is good in some cases. It changes up a bit so it's not too repetitive. I don't think it really gives the vision of waiting in a terminal though. More of a weird dream or something like that.

Overall - A very different sound to it, but it's not bad. Kind of interesting in itself, but I don't like the title that you chose for the song.

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NeverHundred responds:

Maybe in the weird dream the person is in a terminal. huh? Ever thought of that. It's okay... neither did I.

[[LY] .-- Tempered Grace --']

Great job.

I enjoyed listening to this submission. It was pretty relaxing and just generally a fun submission to listen to. I thought that it was very simple, but you got it to work for you as it sounded great while not being too cluttered or anything like that. It wasn't too simple either as it wasn't too repetitive or boring. I think you found the happy medium with this song. Perhaps a couple of vocals would make this submission sound a lot better.

Overall - I can't really think of anything to make this much better than it was. Pretty good job all around. Keep up the good work.

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la-yinn responds:

Oi, vocals? :O Well I don't have the slightest clue on where to add vocals and I don't even have a mic atm, but I guess I could try it out sometime. :)

Thanks for the review!

[In the news]

Great job.

I loved the feeling that you give off with your author comments and the audio itself. The music was done very well and the vocals matched the song perfectly. I think you did a pretty good job on not making the music during the vocals too loud and vice versa. I could hear both of them perfectly fine without anything drowning anything else out. I also like the sound effects that you used in this submission.

Overall - I can't really think of anything to critique this submission on. Good job all around.

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GlueR responds:

Thanks for the review! When I made this, I felt the need that this was an underrated subject that needed to be addressed. It's more of a in-your-face political statement than a song. I really think that music has to get over the stage of speaking mostly about love and sex (or in some genres the all so important question of what a pimp the singer is and how fast his rims turn after he stopped his car). The production for this one took quite some time, because I felt that the balances were a bit fragile, but I'm glad that in the end it came out OK. Thanks again for sharing your opinion (and for liking this)!

[Final Fantasy Girl V2]

Pretty good.

The instruments sounded really good, but there was a couple of points in the song where it sounded a bit muffled. I won't take any points off for it since I don't see anyone else say anything about it and it could just be my speakers.

The vocals and lyrics were also done very well. Perhaps the vocals were drowned out a little bit towards the end of the song, but it wasn't too bad. Perhaps think about adding the lyrics to your author comments? Sometimes everyone doesn't hear what is said and it could be useful to stop confusion with the lyrics at all.

Overall - Very well done and I can't really think of anything to critique on your submission other than the few minor things that I talked about. Good job and keep up the good work.

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soulofbass responds:

thanks alot for a great review :D