Nice job.
I was excited when I saw Hip Hop because it made me remember all of those funny as hell rap and hip hop songs that you have. Ah, too bad you don't have vocals on it yet because this is just what this song needs.
I just loved the sound of this song. It was like a mix between Hip Hop and Metal. The guitars were really heavy and gave this song an awesome sound. You had a good electric sound going on during the whole thing too. Another great one man.
Thanks man, vocals one day. FUck, I have no time for those anymore. :*(
Thank you for the review, sir.\m/
It's been awhile.
It's been awhile since I've heard that godly music of yours. I was busy with college and everything, etc... Should be back long enough to catch up on all of the songs that you have made that I haven't reviewed. It's good to here some good stuff again.
You know I've been practicing my scream and I just can't... just can't get it to sound good. What's the secret man? Perhaps I just don't have the lungs for it or something, but I just can't get it to not sound... cheesy I guess. Perhaps we can't all do it like the pro you are.
Anyway, nice addition to the contest. Good job all around and rock on like always.
Thanks man. Good to see you. Yeah, r/l can definitely be a bitch. A balancing act that I'm slowly losing.
Anyways, there are a few instructional videos on the web for vocal ranging.
But my way....
When you are taking a huge ...and I mean HUGE shit...the "hold on to the towel rack for leverage shit scream". Then just open your throat a tiny bit more. And you get brootal. Haha.
GOod to see you man. Thanks for the review!\m/
Good song.
The song was very relaxing to listen to. I let it play about three or four times in the background while I talked to people on AIM and lurked the BBS. I let it play that many times and never got bored or tired of it, which means it wasn't too repetitive, and if it was the song was good enough for a person not to think of that.
A good song to sit back and relax too and at the same time it had a pretty good quick pace to it. Just a good song all around. It probably couldn't have been too much better in my opinion.
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Kind of weird.
I enjoyed the guitar of the submission, but a lot of the song sounded weird. A little too weird at some times, but overall it wasn't too bad. It had a real spaces sound to it or just a sound that made it sound way out there.
It had a lot of variety to it so it never sounded too repetitive or boring, but at the same time the amount of variety that you had made the submission sound kind of weird. It's hard to explain exactly I guess.
Overall - An original sound to it and I especially enjoyed the guitar in the introduction. The other parts maybe not so much.
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Yeah, I tend to shirk away from typical guitar scales. But I didn't think it was all that out there... it's just in E Minor. And this was made before I even dared to tread into the realm of off meter beats...
(Sorry for the low review)
Like I said, sorry for the low score on the review. I just didn't really like this submission too much. Again, not to be rude, but it sounds like what my roommate use to do on his guitar when he was drunk and just randomly strummed on the guitar.
It basically sounded like it didn't have any structure to it whatsoever. Just like you picked up the guitar and you didn't know what you were going to play, but you played it anyway. That isn't always a bad thing, but I don't think it was too good this time around.
I do think one thing could have made this submission pretty good though and that would be lyrics. I know you've heard this already in your other reviews, but it's what really would make this submission good. (Sorry I'm not good with coming up lyrics so I can't help you there too much)
When I hear this song I think of something like Sublime or some other band who usually have relaxing songs. Perhaps add a little bit of drums to the song or another instrument if you can too.
Overall - I personally didn't like it, but it doesn't really mean that it was bad. Just kind of empty and plain for my tastes. Keep working hard though.
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Pretty good.
I honestly had a hard time getting through this a couple of times because I kind of got bored (not to be rude), but I think it was because the submission was really relaxing, which isn't really my kind of music. I can't be opinionated on the review though so the quality of the submission was great. It even put my girlfriend back to sleep when I first listened to it this morning. She really liked it because it was so relaxing so it must have been pretty good.
Overall - Maybe a little repetitive, but a very relaxing song to listen to. Especially if it can put some one to sleep like that.
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Thanks much for the review!!! The repetitiveness is something I'm deffinately trying to overcome!
Not bad.
I think what would have made this submission sound so much better is some heavier guitar towards the end of the song. Right around 1:28 (after the song slows done, which I would like to add sounded perfect where you had it) I think you should have went into a much faster heavier sound with the guitar. Something like a solo would have worked perfectly there.
You had a lot of variety in the song though and it was a fun fast paced song to listen to. Really good job all around.
Overall - Perhaps needed to be a little bit heavier so it could related to the rage that you were talking about in your author comments.
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Pretty good.
I enjoyed the song for the most part. I thought it built up rather nice, but there might have been a couple of places where it was kind of messy. Maybe not though because it didn't sound too bad. Other than it sounding a little cluttered in a few spots I still think you managed to get the sound to work for you. I think the ending was done very well.
Overall - A decent song that may be cluttered a little bit, but the overall quality is good.
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Thanks!
Not bad.
First off congrats on your first audio submission. I do think that it was very well done for what you had here. I liked how it started off with the intro and then built up a little bit to the end. I do think that perhaps you could have ended it a bit better, but the rest of the song was pretty good. Perhaps you should start working on the length of your submission now and try too keep the same good quality that this one had.
Overall - Not a bad piece, but it would probably be much better if it was longer. What you had was pretty good though.
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Pretty good.
The first thing I would like to say is this song gets pretty repetitive right off the back in my opinion, but for some reason it's still a song that I could listen to for quite a long time without getting bored with it or sick of the sound. You had a great selection of sound in this song and it was a great relaxing submission to listen to. Perhaps some simple vocals could make this submission so it wasn't so repetitive, but I don't really know if vocals would take away from the submission a little or not.
Overall - A great submission that seems to be repetitive, but doesn't really get boring or old at all.
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Theme song request: Hip Hop 
