Hm not too bad.
I do like how it starts off slow and then starts to get faster as the song goes on. It just seemed too much like premade loops. I do like the sound of the song though. It's kind of darker and reminds me of a scary video game for the sega or another old console like that. I think you could have worked on the ending a little bit too because the crash cymbal that was used at the end didn't do justice to the rest of the song in my opinion.
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OK, thanks for the great review! I didn't really want it to sound like a premade loop, because it wasn't, but I guess it just turned out that way..
And I know where you're coming from with the ending being a bit anti-climactic.
A bit better.
This is by far better than your other two submissions that I just reviewed, but I still do think that it needs a lot of work. The song itself is very repetitive. You do start to mix it up a bit towards the end of the song, but you still have the same thing going over and over for the entire song making it have the same beat the entire time.
Overall - My biggest tip is to add variety some way. I don't know exactly how since I'm not really good with audio or music at all, but there should be some way to do it.
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Not too good.
I think that it's kind of funny the way that you explained it in your author comments. "a very annoying song that will kill you if you listen to it."
Ha, I don't think it's really that annoying, but I think I understand where you were coming from. If you wanted to make it annoying like that then you need more random noises in it.
If it's suppose to be a good loop for someone to use in a flash or something then I think it could be used. I think it could be used for a small part of a flash and just have it loop two or three times in a row. Probably in a flash that's for comedy.
I don't see it being to useful to listen to or to use other than that though because it's pretty short. If you make it about 10 seconds longer and add a couple of different noises in there then perhaps it wouldn't be too bad.
Overall - Not very good because of it's length, but it's not that bad of a loop itself.
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suprising...
Needs some work
It is rather short, but I'm going to stay away from that in my review. I didn't really enjoy this submission at all. It didn't really sound like anything and especially didn't make me think of myself sitting at the throttle and waiting to be deployed into the array of lasers and space ships. If anything it made me think of someone falling asleep at the wheel of a car and almost drives into a big rig truck, just to serve into another one. I do admit that it loops just about perfect though.
Overall - Kind of short and doesn't really sound like it would to appeal to many people. Keep up the work though.
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Interesting.
It was very different and for that I think it's very good. It had an original sound to it. I liked how it changed up several times throughout the entire song. Apparently there were some vocals in there? I listened through two times and didn't hear them. :S Oh well lol, I'm really hard of hearing so I probably didn't catch them. I do think that it could have used some more (I'm assuming there is vocals in it) throughout the song. Perhaps something like a countdown from 3 to 1. For some reason I think of that when listening to this song. It kind of goes with the whole moon theme too.
Overall - Very different and a fun song to listen to. If there were vocals I didn't notice them at all, but I do think it could use more vocals throughout the song. Keep up the good work.
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lol there really arent any vocals in there. its just a woman breathy moaning. like ahh.
im thinking of throwing in a queen of england speech in there. the three moons kinda signify that it isnt happening on this planet. we have on moon. or maybe over a three month period of time. i like being vague when naming songs so it will fit in the listeners head better.
thanks for the sweet review. RRC kix ass
Ha yeah... repetition..
The entire thing was pretty repetitive, but obviously you knew that. I personally thought it sounded a little weird for some reason. The dun dun dun part. (The only way I could explain it sorry :P) It's not that bad though. It had a pretty catchy beat to it and it made my girlfriend dance in her chair so I guess it's good enough. :P
Overall - I think it sounded just a little off and too repetitive, but it was different and for that I will give it a good score.
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Well, I guess Electro House tracks are repetitive without Vocals lolol.
Thanks anywayz :D
Hmm, I could probably just..
I could probably just copy and paste my last review for your other song. I think that you need to make it into a song instead of the very short segment that you had. It sounds really off for some reason like there are errors in it. I'm not sure if they are errors or if you did that on purpose to give it an interesting sound. Either way it does sound a lot different.
Overall - Way too short to really give it a proper review in my opinion.
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Kind of different and short.
This sounded a lot different then a lot of stuff that you find on this website. I think that you need to make it about 10 to 20 seconds longer and make it loop a little bit better if your going to have it down as a loop. Other than that I can't really say what to improve on too much since the submission was so short and everything.
Overall - Make it longer and make it loop a little bit better. That should improve the score that I gave you by a couple of points.
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Yet another game..
That I've never played before. :P
Ha, all of these 8-bit songs on this website I've never even heard the game. That being said I can't give too great of a review since I can't compare it to the original versions at all. The song itself was very fast pace and fun to listen to. You used great sound effects from which I assume is the game. Great length in the submission also.
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Just search YouTube for "Balloon Trip" and you should get plenty of videos with the music in context. It's a great song, imho.
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