I chuckled at first with the original Tarzan calls, but it quickly got annoying in my opinion.
I was kind of left with this impression of what was the point of that? No punchline to drive it home even though it seemed to be going for comedic effect.
I finished this hoping for more, but was kind of left dissapointed.
Now I explain: Tarzan's scream is said to be its power over animals. By dint of screaming he loses his power at the wrong time. No voice = No power.
I'm confused... Why is the person repeatinging themselves like that? It was way too long of a scene in my opinion. I thought it was borderline too long before he started repeating himself.
Cutting out the repetition there and increasing the speed of when we get to the punchline would be beneficial. I legit got bored waiting for the joke, which wasn't awfully great as it was.
Animation is alright, the graphics were fotting for the style. I think you have some good skills, but this submission doesn't really do anything for me.
Ok,thanks
This is brilliant. The ghosts and scenery were professionally done. This was really good all around.
The body of the baby was a bit sloppy and could have been cleaned up a bit, but extremely smooth animation through and through.
Thank you! I appreciate the support. This was my first time casting a puppet in foam latex so I agree it turned out pretty rough! Hopefully I can fine tune the process in the future
I'm assuming this was removed because the newgrounds community votes on new submissions. If they dislike the submission and they vote low as a community then your submission gets removed. There doesn't need to be an explanation because you click a little button that says you've agreed to the terms, conditions, and understand how to use the site. This process is clearly explained in the FAQ of the website, the thing you were supposed to have read!
The submission is really nothing. There's nothing to vote on here. There's no animation, there's really no point to this submission at all.
Either post the finished product or some sort of polished results so the community in fact has something to work off of.
Seriosuly, what am I supposed to review here? There's no animation at all.
that's not the point of it, it's supposed to tell a story, what? does every thing need a flurry of special effects and high budget explosions in order to be considered valid? one of the things I loved about the original doki doki literature club was it's ability to tell an AMAZING story with very simplistic visuals, I'm trying to emulate it as best as I can, since the world has established that the user interface is part of the setting. when you read a book do you think "what is there to review? there's no animation." praise or critique the storytelling and humour, the twist at the end. also this originally DID pass judgment, it got around 3 stars, which is enough to get on the site, by all means, the rules dictate that it should be on here, but it was removed like 2 weeks later for....?
Loved it, hope to see a lot more from you.
The beginning scene was a bit dark. Perhaps finding a way to make the stars a bit brighter could help out.
At first there seemed to be a lot of chopiness when camera angles changed and also a bit of unwanted shadows in the beginning.
It all seemed to work it's way out after that though. Overall, very smooth and professional looking.
Thanks a ton! I really appreciate the feedback.
If this is a bit rushed and messy then I want to see you when you're on your best. Following to see what else you can make!
Not gonna lie, I didn't expect the different reacts. I actually was set for the blowback since I was doing something risque and the tweets shown dealt with some touchy subjects, yet at the same time needed to be pointed out because of how people acted. Welp, I do plan on making more in the future but probably shorter ones since I do have a couple of classes in two weeks dedicated to 2D animation.
Yo, this looks like one of the proper steps needed to make a professional level animation.
You've got a nice style of artwork and I'm hoping to see you improve and grow as an animator.
Ah, thank you! :) Sketchy as these little things are, they're stepping stones to get where I want to be. Your kind encouragement keeps me going!
I guess I was expecting something to happen? I think this was very poor all around.
Even if you just represented the story with some artwork like you did in the beginning throughout the entirety of the submission the quality would have gone way up.
The writing was boring to say the least. I kept waiting for something interesting to happen, but it was just this really poorly written plot about him learning English. Heck, you could have even saved this submission by showing him say something like cock joke at the end.
Heck, even some voices to voice over the writing could have improved this.
I see your criticism, I tried my best to make as successful as possible, but I won't make "the joke you said" in the end, I only make stuff that is friendly to the kiddies/teens.
This is an extremely high quality animation that not only gives off a video game feeling based off of it's art style, but also with the 8-Bit style music and theme.
Not sure if ita really a Pico Day submission, but it's a visually appealing loop for sure.
Well. I explained why i still thought i should post it today. The radish animations i made only existed because of newgrounds . I think that makes it a part of newgrounds, even if thats just to me.
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