Fro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Silence !]

I'm confused... Why is the person repeatinging themselves like that? It was way too long of a scene in my opinion. I thought it was borderline too long before he started repeating himself.

Cutting out the repetition there and increasing the speed of when we get to the punchline would be beneficial. I legit got bored waiting for the joke, which wasn't awfully great as it was.

Animation is alright, the graphics were fotting for the style. I think you have some good skills, but this submission doesn't really do anything for me.

nugolicartoon responds:

Ok,thanks

[Without a Fright.]

This is brilliant. The ghosts and scenery were professionally done. This was really good all around.

The body of the baby was a bit sloppy and could have been cleaned up a bit, but extremely smooth animation through and through.

JellyDraft responds:

Thank you! I appreciate the support. This was my first time casting a puppet in foam latex so I agree it turned out pretty rough! Hopefully I can fine tune the process in the future

[Space Food]

Loved it, hope to see a lot more from you.

The beginning scene was a bit dark. Perhaps finding a way to make the stars a bit brighter could help out.

At first there seemed to be a lot of chopiness when camera angles changed and also a bit of unwanted shadows in the beginning.

It all seemed to work it's way out after that though. Overall, very smooth and professional looking.

Anonamix responds:

Thanks a ton! I really appreciate the feedback.

[THE GOAT]

If this is a bit rushed and messy then I want to see you when you're on your best. Following to see what else you can make!

ThatOneMotherfucker responds:

Not gonna lie, I didn't expect the different reacts. I actually was set for the blowback since I was doing something risque and the tweets shown dealt with some touchy subjects, yet at the same time needed to be pointed out because of how people acted. Welp, I do plan on making more in the future but probably shorter ones since I do have a couple of classes in two weeks dedicated to 2D animation.

[Clocks of the BBS]

Ha, multiple Cock Clocks.

Little-Radiodemon responds:

C(l)ock Joke!

[Lucky Day Lipsync]

Yo, this looks like one of the proper steps needed to make a professional level animation.

You've got a nice style of artwork and I'm hoping to see you improve and grow as an animator.

DefectiveAgency responds:

Ah, thank you! :) Sketchy as these little things are, they're stepping stones to get where I want to be. Your kind encouragement keeps me going!

[Dashkin Language Learning]

I guess I was expecting something to happen? I think this was very poor all around.

Even if you just represented the story with some artwork like you did in the beginning throughout the entirety of the submission the quality would have gone way up.

The writing was boring to say the least. I kept waiting for something interesting to happen, but it was just this really poorly written plot about him learning English. Heck, you could have even saved this submission by showing him say something like cock joke at the end.

Heck, even some voices to voice over the writing could have improved this.

StylusBox responds:

I see your criticism, I tried my best to make as successful as possible, but I won't make "the joke you said" in the end, I only make stuff that is friendly to the kiddies/teens.

[Bad-ish (Less Than Less Than Rad?)]

This is an extremely high quality animation that not only gives off a video game feeling based off of it's art style, but also with the 8-Bit style music and theme.

Not sure if ita really a Pico Day submission, but it's a visually appealing loop for sure.

gatekid3 responds:

Well. I explained why i still thought i should post it today. The radish animations i made only existed because of newgrounds . I think that makes it a part of newgrounds, even if thats just to me.

[C&H Penny Farthing Animatic]

This one is very fitting in black and white due to it's old timey nature and theme. How did he pay for those upgrades? It doesn't look like he had traded any of his stuff for it. Did he perhaps have prepaid horse leg insurance cards?

Galneda responds:

What with the big hat, clean shave, and fancy clothes, he always read to me like a lucrative businessman of the time. I just assumed he had the spare cash.